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Coming fairly soon now! Currently in post production phase - but I shall put up some teasers no doubt!! In the meantime ...

Supergirl V? Did I miss parts I through IV? Oh no! How do I get to see those first. I don't like to see these things out of order, since that's... hey, wait! Did I misread that? Is that actually Supergirl vs The Fugitive Witch of Daxam? I'd add that extra "S" if I were thou, AEM.



With that said, however, I'm sure this will be a smash hit. You're earlier stuff was fantastic!

Hehehehe, yes, I guess you could read it as 5 too. That centered V looks cool though and you stick a little s on the there and it sux! I figured that is what the folks over at DC thought when they did Batman V Superman, it's just a V and is on the posters, the DVDs etc etc etc!! That's the last time I stick your name in a nice spot on my poster and you don't get your own trailer on the lot!

Use vs!! :P

tmon wrote: ↑

4 years ago

Use vs!! :P

I like your twin brother over at DeviantArt better than you!!

There is and has only been one me tmon the great!!

Hi all - I thought I would get the ball rolling then and put up this first little part of the substantially reworked movie! This project has taken MANY man hours to make and I would like to thank DrDominator9 for his input into it. Unlike my other work which is mostly single scene stuff this in comparison is "movie length". You are not going to get instant peril but it IS in there and I hope you come along for the journey to see what happens to our heroine. As ever if you like what you see, please leave a comment or drop me a message - so long as it isn't about "V" or "Vs" !!

BEST VIEWED AS A SLIDESHOW AT ABOUT 133% (CTRL + NUMPAD +/- TO ADJUST)

CLICK THE FIRST IMAGE AND THEN CURSOR-KEY-RIGHT TO ADVANCE TO THE NEXT! ENJOY!!




































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There is currently an issue with the forum image viewer which is going to be fixed shortly and I will update the story once the fix is done The frames are best seen in full screen as a slideshow, not flat on the page as they are now.

But ... what is in update 2? Well ... Jor-El is presiding over the judgement of someone, it seems!!

Hi all, here is the latest installment in the story. I am sorry you can't see these in all their glory - still waiting on admin to fix the slideshow lightbox add-on for for the forum. This will be the last update for the story I put up here until it is fixed. If you like how this story is going please a comment in the thread below! Enjoy!






























































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I'm excited to see where you'll be taking this story. Thanks!

Many thanks to MH for fixing the image handling for the forum!

As ever - these frames are best viewed as clicked on images - and RIGHT CURSOR key to the next image OR click to the right to advance the frame.






































































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Just wNt to say thanks and congrats. No doubt a ton of work and your nailing it. Hope Supergirl gets hammered as well. Make her beg and bleed then strip her before sending her back home to face council. A dull forever baby. Keep crafting and stay safe, Spain is no joke.

Get Your Exxon wrote: ↑

4 years ago

Just wNt to say thanks and congrats. No doubt a ton of work and your nailing it. Hope Supergirl gets hammered as well. Make her beg and bleed then strip her before sending her back home to face council. A dull forever baby. Keep crafting and stay safe, Spain is no joke.

Heh - well - we shall see how that plays out, won't we !! But talking of facing the council ....






























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Hi all, another big update while I try and catch up with my planned release schedule which should become each Sunday and Wednesday. Following on roughly with the movie, I've tweaked the scene - hope you like.

As ever - best viewed when clicked on then right cursor, or click to the right of the image to advance, frame by frame! Enjoy!!















































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Interesting that Supergirl is a debutante and it appears to be a spoiled one at that. It will make her fall even sweeter

ksire_99 wrote: ↑

4 years ago

Interesting that Supergirl is a debutante and it appears to be a spoiled one at that. It will make her fall even sweeter

When you are trying to break into the the top tier of your civilization I guess you are expected to keep up certain standards!

Here is the latest update which should get us all caught up to where I want to be - and you'll get smaller updates each Wednesday and Sunday from now on.













































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Interesting story, seems like Kara has a thing for people in charge.

This is progressing nicely. But let’s not keep our girl out of her blue leo for too long. You already have me cheering, clapping with hat in hand. Bring the pain, and let’s get Supergirl constrained. Kidding aside I’m enjoying this, very original. Well crafted. Nothing but thanks.

Get Your Exxon wrote: ↑

4 years ago

This is progressing nicely. But let’s not keep our girl out of her blue leo for too long. You already have me cheering, clapping with hat in hand. Bring the pain, and let’s get Supergirl constrained. Kidding aside I’m enjoying this, very original. Well crafted. Nothing but thanks.

Hehe, well, I did warn you all this was going to be movie length and with a story, unlike some of my other stuff which can be more of an instant peril fix. We are only 10% of the way into the story but already there is the threat of a forced arranged marriage, now that Jor-El's scheme to have Kara innocently help her cousin has been uncovered ...

It's another wicked Wednesday and the orphan, Kara Zor-El continues with her plan to blend in with the human population of Midvale! Let's see how she gets on, shall we? I've tried to pitch some of the humour at a more innocent level, hope you like it!

























































































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Interesting chapter, I wonder what cultural misunderstandings are afoot (bonding as marriage, or more direct, I guess we'll see).

Agreed. Best chapter to date. Several times you had me in stitches. Applause. Applause.

It's a Sunny Easter Sunday and time to continue with the story. Linda has now gotten herself enrolled in the school and after a quick orientation and serving out her double detention that she earned during her encounter with one of the teachers she gets back to the mission at hand...

































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Ohhhhh yeah! Please say that the next update continues the action? Expectations are high, can’t wait to see what you do with this classic scene.

Dare I say, sir, you have saved Easter.

Ah, easter cliff-hanger (I guess it is sort of traditional by now "Oh god, he died.... or did he, tune back in in 3 days for the next episode of Bible2 - Forgive harder!")

Mlod wrote: ↑

4 years ago

Ah, easter cliff-hanger (I guess it is sort of traditional by now "Oh god, he died.... or did he, tune back in in 3 days for the next episode of Bible2 - Forgive harder!")

Love that, Mlod!

Jesus Reborn - Without Any Vengeance!

Thanks for the messages guys which I know made my Easter - it's good to know there are people out there watching I suppose with such a well known movie you'll know every scene and be mentally tallying them off as they appear. You might even be waiting for one scene or another in particular - so, you know you cant get them all, all at once, but I hope what I have done will still be able to take you by surprise, now n then! I look forward to continuing with you all on Wednesday!

If we don't get every single scene, we'll be horribly disappointed, AEM. Each scene in the movie was a gem on its own and deserves your unique perspective and skill. So, yes? Do that or why bother!

DrDominator9 wrote: ↑

4 years ago

If we don't get every single scene, we'll be horribly disappointed, AEM. Each scene in the movie was a gem on its own and deserves your unique perspective and skill. So, yes? Do that or why bother!

Really? Crap! Errr, I am just doing a quick review ... see where I'm at!

Great going! And I see that the action is about to pick up, too. Excited!

Hi all, welcome to the Wednesday update!

In previous episodes we saw that Selena's magic orb warned her that a Krytponian was nearby. To evade detection Selena chose to avoid using magic and had to recall her magical pet that skulks invisibly within Midvale. The creature seemingly consumes negative feelings and ill will, giving it a demonic appearance whilst also somehow creating a sense of well being in the town. Now, after Supergirl serving out her detention earned earlier in the day she resumes the hunt for the witch once more and detects the ponderous pet on its return to its mistress!! ...And now, we continue!















































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Just read your story so far and I am hooked. Can't see what the future holds for the girl of steel.
I hope I don't tread on any toes with my story- but I think they are heading in very different directions. I came up with my basic plot back in Jan but if I do accidentally have some similarities it wasn't intentional.

Keep cooking up that brilliant story dude.

supergirl1984 wrote: ↑

4 years ago

Just read your story so far and I am hooked. Can't see what the future holds for the girl of steel.
I hope I don't tread on any toes with my story- but I think they are heading in very different directions. I came up with my basic plot back in Jan but if I do accidentally have some similarities it wasn't intentional.

Keep cooking up that brilliant story dude.

Hi dude - first off I am so glad you like the story, and if anything it was me who was worried about treading on your toes. I am sure even though we will inevitably have some similarities in our stories, just because the images lead us that way, we will have enough variation to offer something unique! And I have to say, it was because of your efforts in your other threads that I realised that there might be a story for me to remake out of the movie - so thank you for that. In fact, I don't know if you saw, at the start of the thread is a "Movie Poster" type thing ... and your name is on it near the bottom - I hope that's okay!

Wow, no that is incredibly nice of you. I missed the poster so I'll check it out.
And I am so glad this movie is getting new life injected into it and there are so many places you can take it. I'll never get sick of looking at Helen so I'm really enjoying this resurgence- hopefully more people start working on things.

The look on Helen’s face as she gets up has always been a fav. And props on the effects - you did a great job with the gas.

Not entirely sold on the heat vision. Not sure, makes her look kinda godlike, in an old movie kinda way. I know, this is an old movie but like really cheesy old movie.

Looking forward to more.

Hello and welcome to another safe and secure lockdown Sunday!

Supergirl is attempting to find the fugitive witch but has discovered her pet instead and the chance encounter has turned into a battle! Lets watch as the battle unfolds!













































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That's what I'm talking about! Great installment!

Gotta say that I love the concept you came up with in this sequence of the monster's negative energy blast, making Supergirl feel so empty and lost; not to mention the visuals matching the dialogue to perfection. Great job, AEM!

brdiy wrote: ↑

4 years ago

That's what I'm talking about! Great installment!

Thanks dude - glad you like it - And than you too, DrD - I know the battle till now has followed the movie but hope the change in motivations and the monster's behavior have at least refreshed the scene a bit! I look forward to delivering you more on Wednesday 22nd!

Love the scene and would happily watch over and over.
Would be cool to hear/read what negative thoughts the cloud is inducing. Feels like good way to up peril. Best part is use of “I can’t” soooo Supergirl movie.

#teambeasty

It's a welcoming Wednesday and it's time to update the story. The Luminous-to-be, Kara Zor-El is locked in battle with some kind of invisible creature which is Selena's pet. How will the battle play out and who will be victorious?













































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Love the diminishing thuds off into the distance. It's the little things that make this series such a delight. Of course her thoughts about being completely done in there, feeling completely defeated are also great, too.

Welcome to another Supergirl Sunday update

The story so far - Supergirl has had her first indirect confrontation with the fugitive witch. Selena's pet has been driven off and the now exhausted Supergirl returns to where her alter-ego Linda Lee now resides with Lucy Lane at the dorm.







































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Poor Kara, may she find privacy. Who am I kidding, better if she doesn’t. Here’s hoping there is some show to go along with the tell.

Welcome! Wednesday is upon us once more and it is time for the midweek update

In her search for the fugitive witch, Kara Zor-El the aspiring Luminous-to-be has begun to blend in with the human populace. Her first step was to enroll at a prestigious school where she would masquerade as a student by day. By night she began her intensive search of the witch who she had detected nearby. Unfortunately the witch has taken steps to prevent being found but not before Kara had come across her pet monster first! The battle resulted in a tie, Kara left exhausted and the monster driven off into the distance. But ... that was not all that happened that night, Kara discovering that her body was affected more than just the normal solar empowerment she had been trained for! But what has fate conspired to have happen next? Let's see!!









































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I love how you made that run in with the drunk your own. "S for slut". Poor Kara lol. Girl can't catch a break.

supergirl1984 wrote: ↑

4 years ago

I love how you made that run in with the drunk your own. "S for slut". Poor Kara lol. Girl can't catch a break.

Heh, thank's - I played around with the movie scene sequencing a lot and in my mind I had a few ways I might spin this scene to suit my needs. In one iteration this movie scene would have come much later in my story and the dialogue would have had a significantly different direction to it. Fortunately @Tallyho saved my bacon, I could use this scene as it is now and still have something else later in the story.

For now though poor Kara is left to puzzle over her physical and psychological responses to the likes of the teacher giving her detention and the drunk dorm warden. How sensitive these Kryptonians are to alien suns!

Welcome, it's Sunday once more and it's time for more Supergirl.

The story so far - Kara is trying to blend in at the school so she can use it as a base to find the witch who stands between her and the prize she seeks... to become a Luminous of Krypton. The question is, is she really blending in, or standing out?!















































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Welcome to a bewitched Wednesday.

The story so far - Kara has spent the day recuperating after her battle with Selena's pet the previous night. Now, after a day of classes and hockey the Kryptonian's alter ego, Linda Lee, relaxes with Lucy and her friends at the Dorm. Selena, knowing her hunter is temporarily out of the picture pushes on with her own plans...









































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Playing catch up: love what you’re doing. The fight scene in particular was a standout, but even when the story shifts to other characters…well, it’s still better than the ’84 movie.

Looking forward to your take on all the great scenes to come. The presentation, thus far, has been excellent. Keep going.