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Posted: **Fri Feb 25, 2005 11:54 am**

WTF!!! I am utterly speechless. I am forced to put away my keyboard as I can only wish to write a story half as good as this. FREAKIN' MASTERPIECE!!!! I can only wonder what you have in store for the remainder of the plot; but I hope the do-gooders finally get their asses handed to them!!! Either way, I'll be on the edge of my seat in anticipation.

ps. It's good to see you writing stuff again.

Posted: **Fri Feb 25, 2005 2:16 pm**

This story is excellent C, you need to update soon, it has defently been better than the last couple of mine. I don't like or really dislike anything I written lately, any hints to get my creative mind working again?

Posted: **Fri Feb 25, 2005 4:37 pm**

C, you have truly outdone yourself here. All of us other authors are merely lurking in the shadows while you bask in the light. No kidding my friend, this one is pure genius.

Please, oh please, keep the updates coming. And don't let this one end too soon. Let's get a good look at what all these nefarious villainesses bring to the table. (And I just know you have something special in store for young Cardinal, right??)

You are the master. Please continue...

Posted: **Sun Feb 27, 2005 8:36 am**

Fantastic start!!! the heroines and villainesses are perfect!! great costumes and writing style!! you capture all the important nuances!!

Cant wait to see what tights filled peril awaits our brave heroines!!! :twisted:

Posted: **Mon Feb 28, 2005 4:47 pm**

Excellent Story!!

Posted: **Thu Mar 03, 2005 4:53 pm**

Come on C, let's see some more of this incredible tale. You can't leave us hanging like this.

Posted: **Fri Mar 04, 2005 11:10 pm**

Posted: **Sat Mar 05, 2005 12:41 am**

Excellent update C! Hmm I can't wait to see the back up coming for the heroines, and what you have instore for Nightswan. Keep up the great work.

Posted: **Sat Mar 05, 2005 8:41 am**

Great update! Cannot wait to see more.

Posted: **Mon Mar 14, 2005 7:46 pm**

Posted: **Mon Mar 14, 2005 11:59 pm**

AWSOME UPDATE!!!! Love this story, C, hope you update soon!

Posted: **Tue Mar 15, 2005 10:20 am**

Amazing. Simply amazing. Please, more...

Posted: **Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:08 pm**

Posted: **Sun Mar 20, 2005 2:01 pm**

Great update C! Oh man the tension is killing me, hope it lasts....

Posted: **Thu Apr 14, 2005 6:56 pm**

Posted: **Thu Apr 14, 2005 9:58 pm**

WOW!!! Gotta take a breath after reading that one...Well worth the wait...hope the bidding for Nightswan starts soon.

Posted: **Fri Apr 15, 2005 1:00 am**

Man you wonder if all those characters got group rates for the airfare

Great addition C! Also thanks for the nod to events in my last story. Loved the small talk between everyone, espically Ice Princess and Anagram, hope they pair up again in the future. Excelent as aways!

Posted: **Fri Apr 29, 2005 10:39 pm**

Posted: **Sat Apr 30, 2005 10:22 pm**

Oh come on C, how much longer can you leave us in supense ;-) Another great update, can't wait to see the climax!

Posted: **Mon May 02, 2005 9:21 am**

Posted: **Mon May 02, 2005 4:48 pm**

I know the feeling! Great Job though C!

Posted: **Tue May 31, 2005 10:56 pm**

Posted: **Wed Jun 01, 2005 1:00 am**

Excellent C! Great update and love how you blended all your flash back into the story. Keep up the great work.

Posted: **Wed Jun 01, 2005 9:17 am**

This story just keeps getting better and better. Do I sense that it's now building to a "climax", pardon the pun? Looks like there's going to be more than one heroine to auction off soon. Keep up this amazing tale!

Posted: **Fri Jul 08, 2005 9:11 pm**

Posted: **Fri Jul 08, 2005 10:33 pm**

Another excellent addition C!

Posted: **Sat Aug 13, 2005 7:10 pm**

C, I've got hand it to you, you are a truly gifted writer, my friend. I've read all 8 parts of this story today and it was like watching an epic on Masterpiece Theater, WOW! :smt119

You've got to give us more soon! I am loving this! :smt055

Posted: **Sat Sep 24, 2005 1:06 pm**

Posted: **Sat Sep 24, 2005 1:43 pm**

Alright Nightswans back! And man how you leave us hanging C, can't wait to see the next part, I know this is chiche but please update soon!

Posted: **Sat Sep 24, 2005 6:25 pm**

C:

This is true prose! You've got it all here: comedy, tragedy, fights, good, evil, horror, philosophy, ancient gods, demonic possession...I could go on and on but you get the point! I have three words for you: WRITE MORE, OUICKLY!
I'm on the edge of my seat!!! :smt103 Great update!!

Posted: **Mon Feb 13, 2006 9:18 pm**

Posted: **Mon Feb 13, 2006 10:17 pm**

Bravo!!! Wonderful conclusion to an epic tale. Tons of possibilities abound. Thank you for treating us to a great read.

Posted: **Tue Feb 14, 2006 4:39 pm**

Excellent story C! I think its the longest on the site, or might be a tie with Pics4Les. It was a great creation, glad to see ya back on the site too. Hope to see more adventures of Cardianl and Nightswan in the future, maybe a little shorter though (just kidding) :-D

Posted: **Tue Feb 14, 2006 5:25 pm**

Brilliant work C! Thanks to pzgr6 for even putting me in the same sentence as this wonderful story! The only thing I found objectionable was the "Nazarene sorcerer" reference. I won't elaborate, I just think it was a bit much. Other than that, it was a thoroughly enjoyable ride with great flow and marvelously entertaining! I look forward to another great story from you C! 8)

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