AWSMan's Custom Thread
Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2021 12:32 am
Some of you may have seen me post before, I've only done it sporadically over the past couple years. But I am a fairly prolific orderer of SHIP customs, and I've been asked on occasion where to find mine, so I decided to make a thread where I'll periodically post the script to one of my customs, a few pics, and a link to where you can buy it. Fair warning, most of mine are fairly dark (hence why I primarily order from PKF Studios these days), and they're all far more focused on noncon sex than other SHIP elements, so they're not going to be everyone's cup of tea. But for those who primarily value the heroine getting humiliated and mentally broken before her ultimate end, they should be appealing. And for people who do purchase the video, it may be interesting to see how the finished product compares with the script I used.
Let's start with my favorite custom to this point:
"Two Pretty Birds" by PKF Studios
Starring:
Ashley Lane as Black Canary
Jade Nile as Renee Montoya
Rock as Rapeman (not his actual character name, but it might as well be)
This is easily one of the most accurate videos to the script I used, with only a couple minor deviations. It's also the darkest, and (in my mind) the hottest. I've used bladder release as an effect to humiliate the heroine and show her broken state of mind in several of my customs, but none of the others compare to Ashley's stream de force here: she really pisses herself twice in the movie, the second time while crawling backwards and crying, which is quite a sight to see. I also happen to know this was PKF's top selling movie last year, so it's gratifying to see that the effort put into the film paid off for the producer. (This is one of my few PKF scripts that didn't include a death ending, but as with all of PKF's videos, one was added to the released version. Probably the one thing I'd do differently if given the chance would be to have her strangled during the final rape instead of afterwards.) This one also felt appropriate to post since today happens to be Ms. Lane's birthday.
SCENE ONE
-We see Black Canary reading news on her phone and finding an article that makes her angry. “Some dirtbag has been raping and killing prostitutes in the Narrows! Sounds like I’ll need to go undercover to catch this creep. He’ll never know what hit him!”
-Cut to a warehouse, where Rock and Laurel (BC) enter, with Laurel wearing a halter top, mini-skirt, and hooker boots. “Come on, baby, I use this spot for all my ‘dates,’” Rock says and begins pawing all over her, but she pushes him away and says they need to discuss terms first. He grabs her and begins groping her more roughly. “Never mind about that, you’re not getting out of here alive!”
-Laurel knees him in the groin, then sends him staggering back with a side kick. “Wow, you fell right for my trap. You’re even dumber than you look!” she teases him. Rock snarls and throws a wild punch, which she easily ducks away from. Laurel continues taunting him as she dodges his sloppy strikes. “What’s the matter, can’t take a woman half your size, you fat loser?”
-As Laurel goes to throw another kick, her heel breaks and she stumbles, giving Rock the opening he needs to connect with a brutal backhand, knocking Laurel down and dazing her.
-“Now you’re going to get it, slut!” Rock growls as he grabs Laurel’s top and rips it apart. Laurel shrieks and tries to push him off, but he grabs her by the throat and slaps her repeatedly until she’s sobbing and cowering from his blows. He then proceeds to tear the rest of her clothes off, giving Laurel a fresh slap whenever her struggling becomes too much of an annoyance. -As he pulls off her panties, Laurel tries to scramble away, but Rock grabs her heels and pulls her back towards him. He takes out his dick and forces her head down onto it.
-Rock roughly fucks her throat as Laurel ineffectually paws at him. She eventually bites down to free herself, coughing and gasping for air as she can finally breathe again. “I have to use my canary cry, even if it blows my cover!” she thinks to herself.
-Laurel stands up and opens her mouth to scream, but Rock grabs her by the throat with both hands and shoves her up against the wall (lifting her off the ground if possible). She slaps weakly at his arms to no avail. With her life being strangled out of her, Laurel’s eyes go wide and well up with tears as she begins uncontrollably pissing all over the floor in terror.
-Disgusted, Rock lets go of her throat, and the heroine cowers against the wall as she sobs in shame and humiliation. “You pathetic little whore, now I’ve really got to punish you!” Rock says. He tosses her over one shoulder and walks towards the bed, periodically smacking her ass along the way while Laurel struggles and wails. -Rock roughly tosses her onto the bed. He crawls on top of her and begins mounting her while keeping one hand clamped over her mouth to muffle her screams, and holding down one of her wrists with the other.
-He turns her over and begins fucking her prison guard style, holding her arms back as Laurel cries hysterically and pleads for him to stop. “I never should have come after you! I’m sorry, just let me go!” she begs pathetically.
-He grunts and fills her with his load as Laurel sobs brokenly. Laurel collapses to the bed, but Rock turns her over. “Who’s the dumb one now, you stupid bitch?! Time to die!”
-He reaches for her throat again, but out of desperation Laurel manages to use her canary cry, knocking Rock out of the bed. As he starts to get back up, Laurel takes off running. Rock walks over to the remnants of her clothes. “Wait, you forgot your clothes!” he yells after her, chuckling. “Dangerous part of the city to go running around naked.”
-In the distance, we hear sounds of a scuffle, and Laurel yelling, “Get away from me! NO! NOOOOOOO!” and more crying as the scene fades out.
SCENE TWO
-Open in the same warehouse, where Rock is dragging another hooker in by her hair. “You better cooperate more than the last one! I don’t mind fucking a dead body!”
-She pushes away from him and pulls a gun from a leg holster. “Freeze, asshole! I’m Detective Renee Montoya, and you’re going down!”
-Rock curses as he’s forced to get on his knees and hold his hands behind his head. “You’re going away for a long time!” she threatens him as she pulls out a pair of cuffs.
-Renee is interrupted by a voice yelling, “Stop, he’s mine!” Black Canary steps out of the shadows, glaring at the thug.
-Montoya is confused. “This man is a rapist and murderer, I’m taking him to jail!” she insists. “He doesn’t deserve to live that long!” snarls Canary. “Get out of the way!”
-With Renee distracted, Rock suddenly wrests the gun out of her hand and jumps up to pull her in front of him as a human shield. Canary’s expression turns to horror as Rock recognizes her from the other night and begins laughing. “I can't believe you're back for more. Word has it a local gang got a hold of you and used you as a cum dumpster all night long!”
-Canary’s eyes well up with tears. “They all had their way with me over and over, you son of a bitch! And when they were finally done with me, they threw me in a dumpster! You need to pay for what you did to me!”
-Rock tells her to shut up and makes her crawl over to him, then unzip his pants and start blowing him as he continues holding Renee at gunpoint. Both women begin to cry as Rock orders the cop to remove Canary’s jacket and cuff her hands behind her back. “I’m so sorry, I didn’t know what he’d done to you!” Renee apologizes to Canary as she cuffs her.
-Rock then forces Renee to strip as Canary helplessly continues to blow him. Once Renee is nude, Rock holds his dick down Canary’s throat until she passes out from lack of oxygen.
-He orders Renee to assume the position against the wall. She tries to remain stoic as he begins fucking her police style, but begins to whimper and beg as he holds the gun against the back of her head. He then turns her around and makes her straddle him as he fucks her against the wall.
-Canary groggily sits up and sees Rock raping Montoya as she wails for help. She tries to use her canary cry, but only coughs; her vocal cords were damaged by the rough throat fuck!
-Rock shoves Montoya to the floor and makes her retrieve the handcuffs key from her clothes. He uncuffs Canary, then holds the gun to her head as he makes her unzip her costume and remove it (leaving the boots and fishnets on).
-He makes both women crawl over to a couch, taking turn spanking them on the way. On the couch he yanks Montoya up to ride him reverse cowgirl while he presses the gun into her back. Canary is forced to play with herself. “If you don’t get off in the next 60 seconds, she dies!” Rock threatens.
-Canary frantically fingers her pussy while crying, as Montoya begs that she doesn’t want to die. After a minute passes, Canary still hasn’t cum, so Rock fires two shots through Renee’s back as Canary screams, “NOOOO!”
-Rock shoves the dying cop onto the floor and advances on Canary, still hard. She starts to crawl backwards, cowering and sobbing. (If Ashley is up for peeing twice in one video, I would like for her to also piss herself again here.) “Please no, I can’t take it any more!” she pleads.
-Rock drops the gun and drags Laurel over to Renee’s body, fucking her from behind as she’s forced to stared into Renee’s eyes as she bleeds out. Rock yells at Canary to apologize to her for pretending to be a superhero when she’s just a worthless slut. “I’m sorry! I am worthless! WAHHH!!!” Canary wails as her endless punishment continues.
-Renee finally gasps her last breath, and Rock turns Canary over to take her in missionary. At first she just lays there and sobs, until she looks over and sees the gun lying nearby. She tries to grab it, but can’t reach. She begins slapping and clawing at her rapist with renewed desperation, as he laughs and goads her on. “Come on, hero! Save yourself!” he taunts her. “I hate you!” Canary screams as he pins her wrists down and licks the tears from her face.
-Rock forces her to beg him to cum inside her, which he does, then lifts Canary’s legs over her head so the creampie drips down into her face as she sobs.
-“Just kill me now!” begs the broken heroine. “Put me out of my misery!” Rock shakes his head, saying he’s going to sell her to the highest bidder in the underworld. Laurel hugs her knees and cries as it sinks in that her nightmare will never end.
Let's start with my favorite custom to this point:
"Two Pretty Birds" by PKF Studios
Starring:
Ashley Lane as Black Canary
Jade Nile as Renee Montoya
Rock as Rapeman (not his actual character name, but it might as well be)
This is easily one of the most accurate videos to the script I used, with only a couple minor deviations. It's also the darkest, and (in my mind) the hottest. I've used bladder release as an effect to humiliate the heroine and show her broken state of mind in several of my customs, but none of the others compare to Ashley's stream de force here: she really pisses herself twice in the movie, the second time while crawling backwards and crying, which is quite a sight to see. I also happen to know this was PKF's top selling movie last year, so it's gratifying to see that the effort put into the film paid off for the producer. (This is one of my few PKF scripts that didn't include a death ending, but as with all of PKF's videos, one was added to the released version. Probably the one thing I'd do differently if given the chance would be to have her strangled during the final rape instead of afterwards.) This one also felt appropriate to post since today happens to be Ms. Lane's birthday.
SCENE ONE
-We see Black Canary reading news on her phone and finding an article that makes her angry. “Some dirtbag has been raping and killing prostitutes in the Narrows! Sounds like I’ll need to go undercover to catch this creep. He’ll never know what hit him!”
-Cut to a warehouse, where Rock and Laurel (BC) enter, with Laurel wearing a halter top, mini-skirt, and hooker boots. “Come on, baby, I use this spot for all my ‘dates,’” Rock says and begins pawing all over her, but she pushes him away and says they need to discuss terms first. He grabs her and begins groping her more roughly. “Never mind about that, you’re not getting out of here alive!”
-Laurel knees him in the groin, then sends him staggering back with a side kick. “Wow, you fell right for my trap. You’re even dumber than you look!” she teases him. Rock snarls and throws a wild punch, which she easily ducks away from. Laurel continues taunting him as she dodges his sloppy strikes. “What’s the matter, can’t take a woman half your size, you fat loser?”
-As Laurel goes to throw another kick, her heel breaks and she stumbles, giving Rock the opening he needs to connect with a brutal backhand, knocking Laurel down and dazing her.
-“Now you’re going to get it, slut!” Rock growls as he grabs Laurel’s top and rips it apart. Laurel shrieks and tries to push him off, but he grabs her by the throat and slaps her repeatedly until she’s sobbing and cowering from his blows. He then proceeds to tear the rest of her clothes off, giving Laurel a fresh slap whenever her struggling becomes too much of an annoyance. -As he pulls off her panties, Laurel tries to scramble away, but Rock grabs her heels and pulls her back towards him. He takes out his dick and forces her head down onto it.
-Rock roughly fucks her throat as Laurel ineffectually paws at him. She eventually bites down to free herself, coughing and gasping for air as she can finally breathe again. “I have to use my canary cry, even if it blows my cover!” she thinks to herself.
-Laurel stands up and opens her mouth to scream, but Rock grabs her by the throat with both hands and shoves her up against the wall (lifting her off the ground if possible). She slaps weakly at his arms to no avail. With her life being strangled out of her, Laurel’s eyes go wide and well up with tears as she begins uncontrollably pissing all over the floor in terror.
-Disgusted, Rock lets go of her throat, and the heroine cowers against the wall as she sobs in shame and humiliation. “You pathetic little whore, now I’ve really got to punish you!” Rock says. He tosses her over one shoulder and walks towards the bed, periodically smacking her ass along the way while Laurel struggles and wails. -Rock roughly tosses her onto the bed. He crawls on top of her and begins mounting her while keeping one hand clamped over her mouth to muffle her screams, and holding down one of her wrists with the other.
-He turns her over and begins fucking her prison guard style, holding her arms back as Laurel cries hysterically and pleads for him to stop. “I never should have come after you! I’m sorry, just let me go!” she begs pathetically.
-He grunts and fills her with his load as Laurel sobs brokenly. Laurel collapses to the bed, but Rock turns her over. “Who’s the dumb one now, you stupid bitch?! Time to die!”
-He reaches for her throat again, but out of desperation Laurel manages to use her canary cry, knocking Rock out of the bed. As he starts to get back up, Laurel takes off running. Rock walks over to the remnants of her clothes. “Wait, you forgot your clothes!” he yells after her, chuckling. “Dangerous part of the city to go running around naked.”
-In the distance, we hear sounds of a scuffle, and Laurel yelling, “Get away from me! NO! NOOOOOOO!” and more crying as the scene fades out.
SCENE TWO
-Open in the same warehouse, where Rock is dragging another hooker in by her hair. “You better cooperate more than the last one! I don’t mind fucking a dead body!”
-She pushes away from him and pulls a gun from a leg holster. “Freeze, asshole! I’m Detective Renee Montoya, and you’re going down!”
-Rock curses as he’s forced to get on his knees and hold his hands behind his head. “You’re going away for a long time!” she threatens him as she pulls out a pair of cuffs.
-Renee is interrupted by a voice yelling, “Stop, he’s mine!” Black Canary steps out of the shadows, glaring at the thug.
-Montoya is confused. “This man is a rapist and murderer, I’m taking him to jail!” she insists. “He doesn’t deserve to live that long!” snarls Canary. “Get out of the way!”
-With Renee distracted, Rock suddenly wrests the gun out of her hand and jumps up to pull her in front of him as a human shield. Canary’s expression turns to horror as Rock recognizes her from the other night and begins laughing. “I can't believe you're back for more. Word has it a local gang got a hold of you and used you as a cum dumpster all night long!”
-Canary’s eyes well up with tears. “They all had their way with me over and over, you son of a bitch! And when they were finally done with me, they threw me in a dumpster! You need to pay for what you did to me!”
-Rock tells her to shut up and makes her crawl over to him, then unzip his pants and start blowing him as he continues holding Renee at gunpoint. Both women begin to cry as Rock orders the cop to remove Canary’s jacket and cuff her hands behind her back. “I’m so sorry, I didn’t know what he’d done to you!” Renee apologizes to Canary as she cuffs her.
-Rock then forces Renee to strip as Canary helplessly continues to blow him. Once Renee is nude, Rock holds his dick down Canary’s throat until she passes out from lack of oxygen.
-He orders Renee to assume the position against the wall. She tries to remain stoic as he begins fucking her police style, but begins to whimper and beg as he holds the gun against the back of her head. He then turns her around and makes her straddle him as he fucks her against the wall.
-Canary groggily sits up and sees Rock raping Montoya as she wails for help. She tries to use her canary cry, but only coughs; her vocal cords were damaged by the rough throat fuck!
-Rock shoves Montoya to the floor and makes her retrieve the handcuffs key from her clothes. He uncuffs Canary, then holds the gun to her head as he makes her unzip her costume and remove it (leaving the boots and fishnets on).
-He makes both women crawl over to a couch, taking turn spanking them on the way. On the couch he yanks Montoya up to ride him reverse cowgirl while he presses the gun into her back. Canary is forced to play with herself. “If you don’t get off in the next 60 seconds, she dies!” Rock threatens.
-Canary frantically fingers her pussy while crying, as Montoya begs that she doesn’t want to die. After a minute passes, Canary still hasn’t cum, so Rock fires two shots through Renee’s back as Canary screams, “NOOOO!”
-Rock shoves the dying cop onto the floor and advances on Canary, still hard. She starts to crawl backwards, cowering and sobbing. (If Ashley is up for peeing twice in one video, I would like for her to also piss herself again here.) “Please no, I can’t take it any more!” she pleads.
-Rock drops the gun and drags Laurel over to Renee’s body, fucking her from behind as she’s forced to stared into Renee’s eyes as she bleeds out. Rock yells at Canary to apologize to her for pretending to be a superhero when she’s just a worthless slut. “I’m sorry! I am worthless! WAHHH!!!” Canary wails as her endless punishment continues.
-Renee finally gasps her last breath, and Rock turns Canary over to take her in missionary. At first she just lays there and sobs, until she looks over and sees the gun lying nearby. She tries to grab it, but can’t reach. She begins slapping and clawing at her rapist with renewed desperation, as he laughs and goads her on. “Come on, hero! Save yourself!” he taunts her. “I hate you!” Canary screams as he pins her wrists down and licks the tears from her face.
-Rock forces her to beg him to cum inside her, which he does, then lifts Canary’s legs over her head so the creampie drips down into her face as she sobs.
-“Just kill me now!” begs the broken heroine. “Put me out of my misery!” Rock shakes his head, saying he’s going to sell her to the highest bidder in the underworld. Laurel hugs her knees and cries as it sinks in that her nightmare will never end.