Mr. McGheeny, you may well be inclined to take shevek's five paragraphs of criticism of your excellent work to heart. That is entirely your prerogative. But whatever you decide, you may want to first consider the source. You see, shevek is also a producer of superheroine content, in the form of a series of videos. Now it must be said that this forum has been inordinately kind to shevek over the last two years by resisting the temptation to explore the artistic merits of his own work even as he has been quite controversial, and even provocative in his superabundant posting habits. But before taking his criticism to heart, you may wish to explore his work, with particular attention paid to the earworm theme song, the haute couture costumes, the Shakespearian level dialog and the brilliantly choreographed action sequences. If, after taking these factors into consideration, you decide to heed shevek's criticism, at least it will be from a vantage point of informed perception.
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