ThatOnePervert wrote: ↑3 weeks ago
Read all 4 parts recently and found them very entertaining.
Thanks, really glad you liked it! It's doing really well and getting like 90% buy throughs to the end of the series so seems I'm doing SOMETHING right.
ThatOnePervert wrote: ↑3 weeks ago
I'd prefer more actual heroics/crimes being performed by the parties while the arrangement is in place, but it still functions pretty well as a magical girl flavored love story.
There IS a big bad they her characters will have to "battle" that is being gradually eased into the story. The next part (which I should be hitting publish on in the next day or two) does some ominous set after a night long threesome. There's a lot more going on then the characters realize.
ThatOnePervert wrote: ↑3 weeks ago
The idea of heroines existing not to defeat the villain in the conventional sense so much as to burn them out is a fun idea I'd like to play with myself at some point.
It's a fun idea I kind of stumbled ass-backwards into in this story! If you ever get around to playing around with it and get something done post a link here
