hi everyone
i have this great story idea i am working on and just want to know what you think
its about a business woman who gets a call for a meeting on a game project she arrives and meets the people and they show her a device called the hero video game she can choose the hero side or villain side and choose any outfit and play against other players to win what ever game they are put in and it can be very bad as they can do anything they want to each other and only one can win
what do you think does it sound like a good story.