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Some of you may have seen me post before, I've only done it sporadically over the past couple years. But I am a fairly prolific orderer of SHIP customs, and I've been asked on occasion where to find mine, so I decided to make a thread where I'll periodically post the script to one of my customs, a few pics, and a link to where you can buy it. Fair warning, most of mine are fairly dark (hence why I primarily order from PKF Studios these days), and they're all far more focused on noncon sex than other SHIP elements, so they're not going to be everyone's cup of tea. But for those who primarily value the heroine getting humiliated and mentally broken before her ultimate end, they should be appealing. And for people who do purchase the video, it may be interesting to see how the finished product compares with the script I used.

Let's start with my favorite custom to this point:

"Two Pretty Birds" by PKF Studios
Starring:
Ashley Lane as Black Canary
Jade Nile as Renee Montoya
Rock as Rapeman (not his actual character name, but it might as well be)

This is easily one of the most accurate videos to the script I used, with only a couple minor deviations. It's also the darkest, and (in my mind) the hottest. I've used bladder release as an effect to humiliate the heroine and show her broken state of mind in several of my customs, but none of the others compare to Ashley's stream de force here: she really pisses herself twice in the movie, the second time while crawling backwards and crying, which is quite a sight to see. I also happen to know this was PKF's top selling movie last year, so it's gratifying to see that the effort put into the film paid off for the producer. (This is one of my few PKF scripts that didn't include a death ending, but as with all of PKF's videos, one was added to the released version. Probably the one thing I'd do differently if given the chance would be to have her strangled during the final rape instead of afterwards.) This one also felt appropriate to post since today happens to be Ms. Lane's birthday.


SCENE ONE

-We see Black Canary reading news on her phone and finding an article that makes her angry. “Some dirtbag has been raping and killing prostitutes in the Narrows! Sounds like I’ll need to go undercover to catch this creep. He’ll never know what hit him!”

-Cut to a warehouse, where Rock and Laurel (BC) enter, with Laurel wearing a halter top, mini-skirt, and hooker boots. “Come on, baby, I use this spot for all my ‘dates,’” Rock says and begins pawing all over her, but she pushes him away and says they need to discuss terms first. He grabs her and begins groping her more roughly. “Never mind about that, you’re not getting out of here alive!”

-Laurel knees him in the groin, then sends him staggering back with a side kick. “Wow, you fell right for my trap. You’re even dumber than you look!” she teases him. Rock snarls and throws a wild punch, which she easily ducks away from. Laurel continues taunting him as she dodges his sloppy strikes. “What’s the matter, can’t take a woman half your size, you fat loser?”

-As Laurel goes to throw another kick, her heel breaks and she stumbles, giving Rock the opening he needs to connect with a brutal backhand, knocking Laurel down and dazing her.

-“Now you’re going to get it, slut!” Rock growls as he grabs Laurel’s top and rips it apart. Laurel shrieks and tries to push him off, but he grabs her by the throat and slaps her repeatedly until she’s sobbing and cowering from his blows. He then proceeds to tear the rest of her clothes off, giving Laurel a fresh slap whenever her struggling becomes too much of an annoyance.
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-As he pulls off her panties, Laurel tries to scramble away, but Rock grabs her heels and pulls her back towards him. He takes out his dick and forces her head down onto it.

-Rock roughly fucks her throat as Laurel ineffectually paws at him. She eventually bites down to free herself, coughing and gasping for air as she can finally breathe again. “I have to use my canary cry, even if it blows my cover!” she thinks to herself.

-Laurel stands up and opens her mouth to scream, but Rock grabs her by the throat with both hands and shoves her up against the wall (lifting her off the ground if possible). She slaps weakly at his arms to no avail. With her life being strangled out of her, Laurel’s eyes go wide and well up with tears as she begins uncontrollably pissing all over the floor in terror.

-Disgusted, Rock lets go of her throat, and the heroine cowers against the wall as she sobs in shame and humiliation. “You pathetic little whore, now I’ve really got to punish you!” Rock says. He tosses her over one shoulder and walks towards the bed, periodically smacking her ass along the way while Laurel struggles and wails.
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-Rock roughly tosses her onto the bed. He crawls on top of her and begins mounting her while keeping one hand clamped over her mouth to muffle her screams, and holding down one of her wrists with the other.

-He turns her over and begins fucking her prison guard style, holding her arms back as Laurel cries hysterically and pleads for him to stop. “I never should have come after you! I’m sorry, just let me go!” she begs pathetically.

-He grunts and fills her with his load as Laurel sobs brokenly. Laurel collapses to the bed, but Rock turns her over. “Who’s the dumb one now, you stupid bitch?! Time to die!”

-He reaches for her throat again, but out of desperation Laurel manages to use her canary cry, knocking Rock out of the bed. As he starts to get back up, Laurel takes off running. Rock walks over to the remnants of her clothes. “Wait, you forgot your clothes!” he yells after her, chuckling. “Dangerous part of the city to go running around naked.”

-In the distance, we hear sounds of a scuffle, and Laurel yelling, “Get away from me! NO! NOOOOOOO!” and more crying as the scene fades out.



SCENE TWO

-Open in the same warehouse, where Rock is dragging another hooker in by her hair. “You better cooperate more than the last one! I don’t mind fucking a dead body!”

-She pushes away from him and pulls a gun from a leg holster. “Freeze, asshole! I’m Detective Renee Montoya, and you’re going down!”

-Rock curses as he’s forced to get on his knees and hold his hands behind his head. “You’re going away for a long time!” she threatens him as she pulls out a pair of cuffs.

-Renee is interrupted by a voice yelling, “Stop, he’s mine!” Black Canary steps out of the shadows, glaring at the thug.
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-Montoya is confused. “This man is a rapist and murderer, I’m taking him to jail!” she insists. “He doesn’t deserve to live that long!” snarls Canary. “Get out of the way!”

-With Renee distracted, Rock suddenly wrests the gun out of her hand and jumps up to pull her in front of him as a human shield. Canary’s expression turns to horror as Rock recognizes her from the other night and begins laughing. “I can't believe you're back for more. Word has it a local gang got a hold of you and used you as a cum dumpster all night long!”

-Canary’s eyes well up with tears. “They all had their way with me over and over, you son of a bitch! And when they were finally done with me, they threw me in a dumpster! You need to pay for what you did to me!”

-Rock tells her to shut up and makes her crawl over to him, then unzip his pants and start blowing him as he continues holding Renee at gunpoint. Both women begin to cry as Rock orders the cop to remove Canary’s jacket and cuff her hands behind her back. “I’m so sorry, I didn’t know what he’d done to you!” Renee apologizes to Canary as she cuffs her.

-Rock then forces Renee to strip as Canary helplessly continues to blow him. Once Renee is nude, Rock holds his dick down Canary’s throat until she passes out from lack of oxygen.

-He orders Renee to assume the position against the wall. She tries to remain stoic as he begins fucking her police style, but begins to whimper and beg as he holds the gun against the back of her head. He then turns her around and makes her straddle him as he fucks her against the wall.

-Canary groggily sits up and sees Rock raping Montoya as she wails for help. She tries to use her canary cry, but only coughs; her vocal cords were damaged by the rough throat fuck!

-Rock shoves Montoya to the floor and makes her retrieve the handcuffs key from her clothes. He uncuffs Canary, then holds the gun to her head as he makes her unzip her costume and remove it (leaving the boots and fishnets on).

-He makes both women crawl over to a couch, taking turn spanking them on the way. On the couch he yanks Montoya up to ride him reverse cowgirl while he presses the gun into her back. Canary is forced to play with herself. “If you don’t get off in the next 60 seconds, she dies!” Rock threatens.

-Canary frantically fingers her pussy while crying, as Montoya begs that she doesn’t want to die. After a minute passes, Canary still hasn’t cum, so Rock fires two shots through Renee’s back as Canary screams, “NOOOO!”

-Rock shoves the dying cop onto the floor and advances on Canary, still hard. She starts to crawl backwards, cowering and sobbing. (If Ashley is up for peeing twice in one video, I would like for her to also piss herself again here.) “Please no, I can’t take it any more!” she pleads.
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-Rock drops the gun and drags Laurel over to Renee’s body, fucking her from behind as she’s forced to stared into Renee’s eyes as she bleeds out. Rock yells at Canary to apologize to her for pretending to be a superhero when she’s just a worthless slut. “I’m sorry! I am worthless! WAHHH!!!” Canary wails as her endless punishment continues.
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-Renee finally gasps her last breath, and Rock turns Canary over to take her in missionary. At first she just lays there and sobs, until she looks over and sees the gun lying nearby. She tries to grab it, but can’t reach. She begins slapping and clawing at her rapist with renewed desperation, as he laughs and goads her on. “Come on, hero! Save yourself!” he taunts her. “I hate you!” Canary screams as he pins her wrists down and licks the tears from her face.

-Rock forces her to beg him to cum inside her, which he does, then lifts Canary’s legs over her head so the creampie drips down into her face as she sobs.

-“Just kill me now!” begs the broken heroine. “Put me out of my misery!” Rock shakes his head, saying he’s going to sell her to the highest bidder in the underworld. Laurel hugs her knees and cries as it sinks in that her nightmare will never end.
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I think Ashley was a good choice for Black Canary. She has a good look for the character, and she looks sexy in black fishnets.
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I meant to update this thread a little more often, so guess I'll stop slacking. This was the first custom I ever ordered, from Cory Chase's studio.

"Destruction of Bat Gurl - Barbara Gordon" by Cory's Superheroine Adventures
Starring:
Michele James as Barbara Gordon/Bat Gurl
Cory Chase as Parole Officer Cory
Luke Lonley as Generic Thug

Scene 1: Barbara Gordon (secretly Batgirl) is asleep in her apartment when she’s roughly dragged out of bed. Her attacker shoves his cock in her mouth and begins roughly fucking it while explaining that he just got out of prison, where her father sent him, so now she’s going to pay the price. Barbara is too groggy and disoriented to fight back as she struggles for breath.
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She finally pushes him off and starts to fight back, but the thug grabs a lamp and slams it over her head to daze her. After several more punches to the face, Barbara is too beaten to do more than cower and beg the thug to take what he wants and leave, but now he has other ideas. He rips off her flimsy pajamas and forcefully fucks her on her own bed. Struggling, Barbara breaks free at one point and tries to run to her bedroom door, but he catches her and pins her to the floor, taking pictures with his phone as he fucks her while she sobs and begs him to stop.
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Finally he finishes inside her and takes more pictures of her creampied pussy, leaving her beaten and vowing to track down this scumbag and make him pay.

Scene 2: Cut to the next day, the thug is in his own apartment when there’s a knock on the door. He answers to find his parole officer questioning his whereabouts yesterday, and if he knows anything about the pictures anonymously sent to Commissioner Gordon of his daughter being violated. He denies it, but clearly not believing him, she starts to reach for her cuffs, but he grabs her in a chokehold and pulls her into the apartment. The thug cuffs her hands behind her back and begins tearing off her clothes. He’s forcing his nude hostage to blow him when Batgirl kicks the door in. She’s tracked him down and won’t let him hurt another girl.
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His victim cries out in relief at her savior. Batgirl rushes towards the thug, but he pulls his hostage back up into a chokehold and threatens to break her neck. He forces Batgirl to toss away her utility belt and unmask, laughing hysterically upon realizing she’s Barbara. He orders the humiliated Batgirl to perform a striptease while he sits down on the couch and fucks the parole officer reverse cowgirl style. The poor girl pleads for Batgirl to save her, but Barbara’s self-confidence is gone; Batgirl is no more. Once Barbara is also nude except for her gloves and boots, the thug roughly shoves his hostage to the ground and advances on Barbara, who is quaking in fear. She throws a punch, but he easily grabs her arm and twists it behind her back, then grabs her other arm and begins taking her prison guard style.
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After pounding the fight out of her, he pushes Barbara against the wall, taking her first standing and then police-style, and forcing her to call him master. Having broken the Bat, he returns to the officer and takes her doggy style while commanding Barbara to pleasure herself as she watches. He finishes on her face and makes Barbara lick it off, before calling his friends to come join the fun as the two victims can only hold each other and sob.
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Back again with my very first PKF custom. This was also my first custom that had a death ending, which is an element I can take or leave; but if the heroine is going to meet her ultimate fate, I've found I prefer death by strangulation during the rape, which is what I used here.

"A Purse Before Dying" by PKF Studios


SCENE ONE:
-Batgirl corners a purse snatcher in an abandoned warehouse. He offers to give back the purse, but overconfident, she says she’s taking him to jail and starts attacking him, initially winning the fight with her superior quickness.
-The thief grabs a pipe laying on the floor and begins violently pummeling Batgirl with it. In danger of being beaten to death, she begins crying and pleading for her life.
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-He unmasks her, then pulls out his dick and forces it into her mouth while holding her hair as Batgirl helplessly slaps at his legs.
-After several minutes she bites down and manages to free herself. Batgirl grabs the pipe and lays out the thug.
-She pulls some rope from her utility belt and says she’s taking him to jail. As she bends over to tie him up, the thug grabs her by the throat and wrestles her to the ground.
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-He tells Batgirl that she should have run when she had the chance as he begins tearing her costume off (costume destruction is preferred if possible), as Batgirl panics and futilely tries to get away.
-Once he’s stripped her nude, he holds her down and begins forcefully raping her as Batgirl/Barbara wails and struggles while screaming for help.
-At one point Barbara manages to shove him off and try to run, but he catches her and shoves her up against a wall, fucking her against the wall and calling her pathetic as she hysterically cries.
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-Ignoring Barbara’s pleas, the thug finishes inside her and throws her to the floor. Standing over the broken heroine, he picks up the pipe and says it’s time to finish what he started, but suddenly she kicks him in the balls and escapes while he’s doubled over in pain.


SCENE TWO:
-Barbara arrives home, still nude. She collapses onto her bed and curls into a ball, sobbing, “I can’t believe that two bit thug beat and raped me!” She cries herself to sleep.
-Unknown to her, the thug has followed her home. He creeps into her bedroom and crawls onto her bed, jerks Barbara up by her hair and starts fucking her mouth. She wakes up and begins struggling, but he tells her he’ll kill her if she bites him again.
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-“This can’t be happening!” Barbara wails as he begins fucking her again, taking her in several positions while laughing at her attempts to push him off.
-At one point he fucks her doggy style while making her bark like a dog as she bawls in shame.
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-He finishes in missionary position, wrapping his hands around Barbara’s throat and squeezing the life out of her just as he cums inside her.
-The thug takes pictures of her body before walking off laughing.
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Guess it's time for another of these. This one was my favorite custom I ordered from Cory Chase, and my first custom with the lovely London River. She was awesome in this, and her performance gives the movie a slightly darker tone than most of Cory's films, particularly in scene two.

"Black Kanary vs. The Syndicate" by Cory's Superheroine Adventures
Starring:
London River as Black Kanary/Laurel
Cory Chase as Laurel's Girlfriend
Luke Longly as Thug 1
JMac as Thug 2

SCENE ONE – DATE NIGHT RUINED

DA Laurel Lantz (Black Kanary) has just returned home with her date, Cory, to find two mob thugs in her apartment. They tell her that she’s been making too much legal trouble for their boss, so he sent them to teach her to know her place. She tells them that she won’t be intimidated, but Thug 1 (Jmac) grabs Cory and starts groping her. Laurel can’t reveal her secret identity, so for Cory’s safety she’s forced to play along as the thugs pull guns and force the women to strip nude.
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Both thugs sit on the couch and make their hostages give them lap dances; Laurel whispers to Cory that she’ll get them out of this as they go along with the degrading act. Both women are then forced to blow their captors.
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Thug 2 (Luke) sets down his gun to grope Laurel’s tits; when she sees an opening, she bites down on his dick and jumps up to grab the gun, but Thug 1 holds his to Cory’s head. Unable to risk Cory’s life, Laurel drops the gun. Thug 2 grabs Laurel by the throat and begins slapping her silly, then moves to smacking her tits and ass, causing her to yelp in pain and humiliation as Cory begs for him to stop.
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Having turned the powerful lawyer into a crying mess, Thug 2 taunts her that if she can just take him down, they'll let her and her girlfriend go. With her confidence shattered, Laurel misses with a couple wild blows before Thug 2 grabs her by the throat and tosses her onto the couch, where he brutally takes her while holding her wrists down as she struggles helplessly. Her crying only intensifies as Cory is shoved down and fucked next to her by Thug 1. Laurel tearfully apologizes to Cory as they are both ravaged without mercy.
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Both women are then fucked prison guard style with their arms held behind their backs, facing each other so they have to witness the other’s violation. Finally they are both painted with cum and told to lick it off each other, which Thug 2 records on his phone before leaving both women sobbing and holding each other.
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SCENE TWO - INTENSE WORKOUT

Laurel is in the gym training for her vengeance when she's startled to see Thug 1 (Jmac) enter and lock the door behind him. He says his boss wanted to be sure she got the message the other night and wouldn't be causing any more trouble. Laurel tells him that he made a huge mistake coming here alone and attacks him, but her punches and kicks do nothing to his heavily muscled frame. He smacks her around a bit, then tears off her clothes (literally if possible).
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Laurel starts to cry as he takes out his massive member. "I'll fall in line, just don't use that on me!" she pleads, but he forces her to her knees and throatfucks her while she gags and weakly slaps at his leg. He then stands her up and lifts her off the ground with one arm to fuck her while standing and carrying her, as Laurel futilely tries to push herself off him.
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Finally he shoves her over a weight bench and fucks her ass (or doggy style if preferred) as she screams in pain until he floods her with his seed. He tells Laurel he'll see her next week and walks off laughing as she tearfully vows revenge.


SCENE THREE – KANARY’S FALL

Thug 2 (Luke) is in his office when Black Kanary bursts in after tracking him down. She demands for him to destroy the footage he took of the DA and her girlfriend. He plays dumb, and she begins attacking him with her bo staff until he submits. He pulls out his phone to delete the video, but suddenly blinds her by shining the flashlight in her eye. He takes advantage of the momentary distraction to sucker punch her, making her drop her staff and go woozy. He grabs her in a chokehold until her struggles start to die down, then strips off her costume while groping and slapping her tits as she futilely tries to fight him off.
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Once he finishes stripping her naked (but leaves her mask on), the thug pulls the heroine down over his knee and spanks her ass red as she bawls and pleads that she won’t come after the mob again if he lets her go. He tells her to prove it by sucking him off, which she does while sobbing in shame.
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Eventually he decides to fuck her too, and shoves her over his desk to take her in the ass while pinning her arms down. She struggles and eventually manages to knock him off and try to escape, but he catches her and throws her to the couch where he begins fucking her in missionary while slapping and choking her as Kanary sobs hysterically. As he finally comes inside her, he reaches down and pulls her mask off, confirming what he already knew.
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Thug 2 informs Black Kanary that she’s now a slave to the mob as she hugs her knees and cries.
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