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As you know I am caught up in wanting to see a heroine captured whil changing! I had discussed it with Ne Goddess and this what I came up with. I thought I would share!

BLACK WIDOW: SECRET REVEALED
WRITTEN BY Bugsy

CHARACTERS
BLACK WIDOW/ ANNIK
DR. SHAW
THUG 1
THUG 2

SCENE 1
SMALL WAREHOUSE

Thug 1 is throwing some boxes aside. Underneath them lies a helpless Black Widow lying face down. The thug rolls her onto her back and scoops her up under her arms and begins to drag her away.

THUG 1
Well, it looks like my lucky day!

As he drags her BW wakes up, she takes a moment to regain her senses! She then breaks free and stands up! The thug is shocked.

BW
I hope you enjoyed your moment!
Are you ready to go to jail!

The tug tries an assault but to no avail. BW makes short work of the punk! She stand over the thug and shakes her head in discuss and walks away!


SCENE 2
DR. SHAW’S OFFICE

DR. Shaw is questioning thug 2.

SHAW
What the hell happened to your
partner!!

Thug 2 jumps to his feet in anger.

Thug 2
It was that damn Black Widow!
She is always sticking her nose
where it doesn’t belong!!

Shaw gets to his feet and moves towards the thug with a look of confusion?

Shaw
Who the fuck is the Black Widow?

Thug 2 laughs! He looks at Shaw with utter dismay.


Thug 2
The superheroine! She has been
fucking up plans in this city for
quite awhile!

Shaw goes back to his desk and sits down. He looks at the man he has hired to handle all of this stuff.

Shaw
Do you mean to tell me that some
woman stopped your pal from getting
what I needed?

Thug 2 slams his hands on the desk.

Thug 2
She is not some woman! She can throw men
around like toys! Many people have tried to
take her out for good, but they have failed!!

Shaw rubs his chin and thinks for a moment.

Shaw
What does this woman look like! What are
her weaknesses? Who is she when she isn’t
kicking ass!

Thug 2 sits back and thinks for a moment.

Thug 2
She is a tall sexy sort of light brown hair woman! As
For weakness, I heard she was taken by chloroform
or knockout gas, but the problem is getting close to her without getting your ass kicked!! Beats the hell out me
me who she is when she isn’t BW.

Shaw smiles.

Shaw
Well, I think it is time we tried to figure
all of this stuff out! Now let’s see about
freeing your partner.

SCENE 3
ANNIK’S PLACE

Annik is taking it easy she is watching the news with interest. She is hoping for a small piece of news that might be a clue to the robberies that have occurred. Suddenly the phone rings and Annik picks up. She say nothing but listens closely. She hangs up and decides to follow a hunch. Annik grabs her coat and heads out.


SCENE 4
SHAW’S OFFICE

Shaw sit’s behind his desk with the two thugs in front of him.

Thug 1
We did what you told us! We leaked some
info that we hope will bring Black Widow
into our hands!

Shaw looks listens to the thug closely.

Oh and thanks for springing me!

Shaw gets up and has a look around his office. He takes a moment to ponder his plan. He turns and looks at the two men.

Shaw
Are we sure the info will get to her?

Thug 2 stands up and moves towards Shaw.

Thug 2
Yeah, in fact I am betting she is on the way!
We had better get out of here, if your plan is
going to work!

The two men leave!





SCENE 5
ON THE STREET

Annick approaches a house. She is dressed in jeans, boots and a jean jacket. She turns to enter the building. As she does she passes a car with tinted windows.


SCENE 6
SHAW’S OFFICE

There is a knock on the door and Annik slips her head into the office. Shaw is on the phone and he waves her to enter. Shaw hangs up the phone and gets up to greet her.

Annik
Excuse me Dr. Shaw but could I have a
few minutes of your time?

Shaw motions for Annik to sit.

Shaw
Of course Miss….

Shaw offers and the same time tries to remove her jacket.

Annik
Oh, no thanks, I have a chill.

Annik sit’s down

Annik
Nik! I am sorry I work for the University
and I would like to ask you a couple of questions
about your recent work?

Shaw moves around his desk and begins to sit down, but he stops.

Shaw
As you well know, a lot of my work
is for the military! I am not at liberty to
discuss it. Is there something I might be
able to help you with?

Shaw now moves around the desk towards Annik. She gets to her feet in a self defence posture.



Annik
Come on Doctor, there are rumours
of a side project! One that might….

Shaw is now in front of her

Shaw
Maybe back when I was young! But I assure
you that I don’t have the energy or time for
side projects.

He gently puts his arm around Annik and escorts her towards the door. Annik is uncomfortable but does nothing.

I wish I could discuss my work with you Nik! I
am very proud of it and you seem to be a charming
smart and beautiful woman! (pause) Perhaps you
would consider having dinner with me?

Annik is taken back by the kind words and actions of the Doctor.

Annik
Thank you very much Dr. Shaw! Perhaps we
Might have that dinner! I am sorry I wasted your
Time.

Shaw smiles and opens the door.

Shaw
Not a problem! I hope we can meet again!

Annik leaves the office and Shaw goes to his cell phone. He thinks Annik might be listening so he texts the thugs.


SCENE 7
ON THE STREET

Annik heads to her car and pulls away. She does not see that she is being followed.


SCENE 8
ANNIK’S PLACE

Annik enters and check her messages. She then pauses and thinks about what had happened. She decides to go have a look at the good Doctors office after hours! She heads to her bedroom to change into the appropriate attire. As she makes her there she removes her shirt to expose the top of her Black Widow costume.


SCENE 9
ANNIK’S PLACE

The 2 thugs enter Annik’s place, they are very careful to be quiet. They see her shirt on the ground outside her bedroom and make there way there. They pause at the door and get ready to burst in.

SCENE 10
ANNIK’S BEDROOM

Annik sits on the edge of her bed! She is removing her boots and is about ready to remove her jeans when the door flies open and the two men rush her!

Thug 1
Quick! Get her!

Thug 2 is able to grab her and pull her up and get the chloroformed soak cloth over her face! She struggles and manages to get free but she has inhaled the fumes. She tries top go on the offence.

BW
I don’t know what you guys want but
it’s over!

As she speaks she begins to lose her balance. Thug 1 charges her! She is able to fend him off and knock him to ground but as she prepares to follow up she looses her balance slightly and that allows Thug 2 to grab her and once again get the cloth over her mouth. As she struggles Thug 1 already on the ground lunges and holds her legs taking away any leverage she might have.

Thug 1
I got ya again Black Widow! I am becoming an expert
at taking you down! Now have a nice sleep!!

Black Widow is furious but can do nothing as she fades to sleep.

Thug 2
Stop your talking and do the job!

Thug 1 then feels her knees buckle. He stands up and as he does he lifts her legs with him. Thug 2 then grabs her under her arms and they toss her on the bed. The two men look at the prize.

Thug 2
Rock, paper scissors for who gets to pull
her jeans off.

Thug 1
You’re on

They play, Thug 1 paper and Thug 2 does rock

Thug 2
Shit!

Thug 1 laughs and starts to pull her jeans off. They are snug so it is a struggle!

Thug 1
Grab her boots! We want her to feel at home!

Thug 2 picks up the boots, as Thug 1 throws the jeans on the floor!

Ok now lets get her to the good Doctor

Thug 1 throws her over his shoulder and the two men leave.


SCENE 11
IN THE THUGS CAR

Thug one is at the wheel!

Thug 1
How is the itsy bitsy spider chick

Thug 2 laughs and finishes tying her hands. He then lifts her head by her hair!


Thug 2
Resting peacefully!

The two men laugh.



SCENE 12
SHAW’S OFFICE

The two men put Black Widow on a couch. She bound and gagged and is still asleep. Shaw pulls up a chair and sit’s beside her. He looks her over as begins to wake up and struggles with her bonds. This brings a smile to his face. She regains her senses and struggles much harder.

Shaw
How about dinner Annik?

This infuriates Black Widow. She tries to speak but it just a muffled sound.

Is that a yes?... Anyway I have other plans
for you! You see I need to aquire a few things
from a very secure building and you are going to
do it for me!

Black Widow struggles and Shaw removes her gag!

BW
You bastard I will never help you! There
is nothing that will….. Ahh what did you
do!

Shaw holds up a syringe which is now empty. As he does this Black Widow throws her head back in pain as the drug makes it’s way through her body. She struggles violently!

My God what is happening to me!!!

Shaw moves in closer!

Shaw
Not having fun? What I have done to you is
use you as a guinea pig for my experimental
drug! What is happening, if my theory is right
you are changing into a killing machine for me
One that will only answer to me!

Suddenly the violent struggles cease. Black Widow slips into a semi-conscious state she tries to speak but can only manage a whisper.

BW
Why? Why me?

Shaw is almost surprised but the question.
Shaw
Why you? You are the perfect candidate? With
your abilities you would make the perfect killer
to protect me! Also because it’s an experiment ,
if it kills you it is no loss only a gain for us!!

Shaw stands up

Ok guys take her out here for now I have plans to
prepare!

The two men grab an arm each and drag Black Widow out of the room. There are only light protests!


SCENE 13
THE BEDROOM

Black Widow comes to her senses, she sits up on the bed and holds her head for moment. She is surprised to not be bound. She then gets up and makes her way out of the room!

BW
Oh this is so over now!!


SCENE 14
THE OFFICE AREA

Black Widow emerges and strikes the hands on hips famous pose.

BW
This game is over doctor!

She heads right towards the Doctor who just looks on with out concern! The thugs try to intercept the heroine but to no avail! Black Widow makes short work of the two men. She in now on a direct course for the Doctor. Who still shows little concern with on coming infuriated heroine. So much so he turns his back to her and continues his work.

Come here you bastard! I’ll teach you
to turn your back on me!

As Black Widow grabs the Doctor and spins him around, she cocks her fist to end it! Suddenly the Doctor smiles.

Shaw
You don’t want to that Widow.
Widow tries to throw the punch but she cannot, she can’t understand what is going on.

BW
What the hell!

Shaw laughs as Black Widow stands poised to take him out!

Shaw
Please put down that fist and sit down.

Her fist lowers and she struggles against her own mind as she moves slowly to the chair she tries to stop her legs from moving but she cannot.

BW
No! I can’t give in!

Shaw moves over and hold the chair for her.

Shaw
Please my dear have a seat. I have to fill you in
on your assignment!

Widow continues the struggle but to no avail. She sit’s she holds her head as she fights hard against her own mind.

Give it up Black Widow! You belong to me!

Suddenly the fight is gone as Widow sit’s entranced! Shaw calls the thugs over and he explains his plan of stealing a large quantity of the drugs he needs to make much more of his special project, the problem is where the stuff is stored. He needs Widow strength!!


SCENE 15
OUTSIDE A WARE HOUSE

The two thugs try to pry open a garage door but can’t do it. Black Widow shoves them aside and easily is able to open the door.

Thug 2
Holy shit!

Thug 1
Oh yeah! Life is going to be good!

Black Widow steps aside and two men find the barrels. They start to roll them but the call in Widow. She picks them up and puts them in the van. She then moves around the van and gets in the side door.

Thug 2
Oh this is just too easy! She is mindless!
I wish I was the doc! I have a command for
her!!

Thug 1 smiles and shakes his head.

Thug 1
Yeah I am sure you do! Come on lets get
outta here!

The men hustle and get in the van.


SCENE 16
GARAGE AREA OF DOCTOR SHAW’S PLACE

Dr. Shaw enters to see the two barrels unloaded. He is in quite a hurry! Black Widow stands beside the barrels.

Shaw
What the hell happened!! You are late!

Black Widow smiles and shoves the barrels over exposing the defeated thugs! Shaw cannot believe what he sees!

But how? This can’t happen! It’s not
possible!!

He tries to run but Black Widow grabs him! As she spins him back to finish him he grabs a syringe from his pocket! He tries to jab Black Widow but she grabs his arm!!

BW
Uh No! Not this time Doctor! My powers were able to push the drug out of my system!

She begins to turn his arm back towards him. As it get’s close to his throat she shakes it out of his and and knocks him cold with one punch.

I win Doctor Shaw… You lose!

The End
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Hey Bugsy! Nice story!

What did David say? Did he like the story? I know him pretty well. I wrote a script for him. Check out "Stone of Evil" on http://www.evilwomenmovies.com. That one's mine! :mrgreen:
"I will not fear. Fear is the mind-killer." - Paul Atredes
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Bugsy
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I haven't heard from him as of yet!

I see you went vampire story! I am suprised they haven't tried to make a superheroine vampire!!
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We've discussed it actually. The King of Vampires, called Dark Knight, is the villain in BW's last adventure. You should check it out! :mrgreen:
"I will not fear. Fear is the mind-killer." - Paul Atredes
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Yeah I have seen it! It was pretty cool.
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