Supergirl in The Den of Pain Part 1

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Fan-fucking-tastic!!!! One of my all-time favorite computer-art SG comic strips. McGheeny Rules!!!!

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Fan-fucking-tastic!!!! One of my all-time favorite computer-art SG comic strips. McGheeny Rules!!!!

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Hey Doc! Thanks and I am glad to put it out there. As always thanks for the kind words and enjoy :D :yahoo:
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This SG comic strip has been updated. It's tacked onto the first posting. Not sure why McGheeny is having this posting issue. As a help, he should note the comic page number to start at for his update. Just sayin'... :confused:
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Admiral Ackbar on line 1 for you, Supergirl! He says it's urgent!

HINT! "IT'S A TRAP!"
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Admiral Ackbar on line 1 for you, Supergirl! He says it's urgent!

HINT! "IT'S A TRAP!"
Ooops...Too late :blink:
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They have her on the ropes now! Love this work!
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They have her on the ropes now! Love this work!
Thanks Doc!
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:stabbing the mouse button over the spot where the 'thank you' icon might one day return:
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Fantastic work. Will there indeed be a Den of Pain Part 2 by the close of 2020? (I only put that time frame there since there are several unfinished stories on this site that many of us hoping get their exciting conclusions.)
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Fantastic work. Will there indeed be a Den of Pain Part 2 by the close of 2020? (I only put that time frame there since there are several unfinished stories on this site that many of us hoping get their exciting conclusions.)
First, the Den of Pain Part 1 comic was produced as a stand alone story. It wasn't until some years later I started work on a transitioning the sequel. Part 2 has been written but transition to art is in the works. I have three of my stories that I will be posting conclusions to very soon and then I will get to work on completing Den of Pain Part 2. I hope that works for you guys.

As always I GREATLY appreciate your input and comments. I hope you enjoy my work.

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Fantastic work. I'm into slender superheroines and your Supergirl is great.

I hope I will see our good girl taking some beatings like this one by a larger bigger titted villainess
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Supergirl is my jam - and wow what a generous spread you’ve delivered. Wish there had been some sexual peril to accompany the full-on beat down. Maybe even some slight bruising to help sell her defeat. Best part is she gets away. That totally raises the psychological factor. And the hit to her reputation with the cop at the end is pure icing. Great job man - it’s lit and I’m tuned for more.
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Fantastic work. I'm into slender superheroines and your Supergirl is great.

I hope I will see our good girl taking some beatings like this one by a larger bigger titted villainess
Thanks. That is always how I pictured Supergirl and I'm glad others do too. And yes, our little good girl does meet up with some well endowed bad gals :D
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Supergirl is my jam - and wow what a generous spread you’ve delivered. Wish there had been some sexual peril to accompany the full-on beat down. Maybe even some slight bruising to help sell her defeat. Best part is she gets away. That totally raises the psychological factor. And the hit to her reputation with the cop at the end is pure icing. Great job man - it’s lit and I’m tuned for more.
Thanks for your comments. I too have ever been a Supergirl fan and dedicated fan of dastardly "What if" scenarios for the girl of steel. This story has always been one of my favorites and I am glad I had the chance to share it. A “BIG” thank you to DrDominator9 who encouraged me to post it here at SF. I plan to post more Supergirl adventures, and, look for some unsolicited “amore” to come the pretty young blonde’s way. ;)
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Interesting start, but there seems to be something wrong, at least I can only see the first handful of images, the rest just say "Image" without anything there
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Why is it that most of the panels can't be seen?
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A lot of the messages only have the box with the text “image” inside it. Any chance of reposting the pages? I was very much intrigued by what I did see.
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Mlod wrote:
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Interesting start, but there seems to be something wrong, at least I can only see the first handful of images, the rest just say "Image" without anything there
Reposted the entire graphic book. Enjoy.
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Why is it that most of the panels can't be seen?
All panels are back up.
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This is such a great story! Supergirl looks so beautiful in this. Great blend of superpowers and action!
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This is such a great story! Supergirl looks so beautiful in this. Great blend of superpowers and action!
This is still my favorite Supergirl story too. Thanks for the support ;)
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I love her shots in her costume and her flying pics!
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McGheeny wrote:
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Why is it that most of the panels can't be seen?
All panels are back up.
Thanks! I came late to your work. It's excellent. It seems that page 1 of this story is not up. Can you add that? Also, can you refresh the pages of "Introducing the QM in Electric Bill" if it isn't too much work?

What happens? Do you take the pages down after a few weeks, or does the forum automatically do it?
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I just added page 1 again. I will look at the QM section as well. As far as I know SF does something to make these panels disappear. I thought once I post them they were there for the duration. Oh well, as long as people are interested in seeing my work I will do what I can to keep it available.

Thanks!
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McGheeny wrote:
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I just added page 1 again. I will look at the QM section as well. As far as I know SF does something to make these panels disappear. I thought once I post them they were there for the duration. Oh well, as long as people are interested in seeing my work I will do what I can to keep it available.

Thanks!
Thank you very much. My guess is they have an algorithm that removes a lot of the images, so older posts don't take up a lot of space on the server. I'm interested in all your work now, so when you get the chance, if you could post your old comics that would be great.
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Thank you very much. My guess is they have an algorithm that removes a lot of the images, so older posts don't take up a lot of space on the server. I'm interested in all your work now, so when you get the chance, if you could post your old comics that would be great.
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