Name of Custom: Evil Super Gurl vs Super Gurl - Rivals (full and corrected version)
Studio: Cory Chase Productions
This summer I purchased a custom scene through Cory Chase's productions. I wrote a script for a lesbian scene about Supergirl failing to defeat Evil Supergirl. Cory liked the idea and charged me $20 per minute. I ordered 50 minutes of sex for a total of $1,000. Cory said she was charging by the time (duration of sex and will more important in a moment). She did not charge me for the new Evil Supergirl and Supergirl costumes that she purchased for the scene.
Cory was great at communicating to me throughout the process. Despite her good communication, I was still nervous because this was my first custom scene from her. It's reasonable to be nervous when working with someone for the first time.
Her policies about her costumes length, prices, and costume can be found at this link.
http://corychasecustoms.com/faq/
Here is the first script
[spoilers]Kissing – 10 minutes
Evil Supergirl licks Supergirl's pussy – 5 minutes
Supergirl licks Evil Super Girl's Pussy -5 minutes
Supergirl sucks Evil Supergirl's cock – 6 minutes
Evil Supergirl fucks Supergirl cowgirl -8 minutes
Doggy style -8 minutes
missionary -8 minutes
Total - 50 minutes
I want both ladies to keep their costumes and boots/heels on for the entire scene. I just want their tits and pussy exposed during sex.
An Evil Supergirl from Universe 99 has invaded our universe. She has declared all out war and demands world leaders to surrender. She wants to rule both universes. Supergirl confronts her evil counterpart from another universe. The Supergirls clash in an epic battle. They trade punches. Then, they attempt to use their heat vision, but they cancel each other's attacks.
Supergirl says “She is matching me move for move. I must find a way to defeat her.”.
Evil Supergirl says “I know how to beat you.” and blows a kiss at Supergirl. Evil Supergirl knows how to defeat Supergirl. Superheroines cannot use pleasure attacks, but Super Villains like Evil Supergirl can use pleasure attacks.
Supergirl tries to punch Evil Supergirl, but Evil Supergirl blocks the punch. Evil Supergirl counters by pulling Supergirl to her and kisses her. Supergirl cannot break free from the kiss. The supergirls start to make out. Evil Supergirl exposes Supergirl's tits and begins to suck them. Supergirl moans in pleasure. Supergirl says “Why can't I resist your touch?”. Evil Supergirl says “I am you. I know how to make you feel so good.”. They begin to kiss again. Then, Evil Supergirl forces Supergirl to suck her tits.
Supergirl says “You are so sexy.”. Evil Supergirl says “Of course I am. We're the same person.”.
Evil Supergirl leads Supergirl to the couch and starts to lick Supergirl's pink pussy. Supergirl enjoys every moment. Supergirl says “I shouldn't enjoy this, but it feels so good.”. Supergirl cums. Evil Supergirl says You just made yourself cum. How embarrassing.”. Then, they switch places. Supergirl licks Evil Supergirl's pussy. Supergirl loves the taste of her pussy. Evil Supergirl cums shortly afterwards. Evil Supergirl seductively says “I love you supergirl”, and Supergirl says “I love you too.”. The supergirls kiss each other.
Evil Supergirl is now super hot after cumming. She reveals her special super cock from her pussy and she wants to cum deep inside Supergirl to make her pregnant. She is going to use Supergirl to breed an evil army. Supergirl is too seduced to resist.
Supergirl sucks on the large cock. Then, Evil Supergirl fucks her counterpart. Supergirl rides Evil Supergirl's cock. Supergirl says “Your dock is amazing.”. Evil Supergirl bends Supergirl over the desk for doggy style. Supergirl says “Fuck me harder.”. Finally, Evil Supergirl begins to fuck Supergirl in missionary. Supergirl is broken into a super slut. Supergirl says “Please cum inside me,”. Evil Supergirl says “You're going to be the first woman to impregnate herself.”. Evil Supergirl cums deep inside of Supergirl. Evil Supergirl asks Supergirl to marry her and Supergirl is seduced into saying yes with a pussy full of cum. Supergirl is very weak and Evil Supergirl knocks her out with one last kiss. She carries Supergirl back to her universe.
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Negatives:
Unfortunately, my worst fears came to fruition. Cory did not deliver a stellar video. The custom video had numerous errors. I listed all the errors below.
I shared these opinions with her after I watched the video. I was frustrated because the scene is twenty minutes shorter than paid for, and the script was not difficult to follow. Cory Chase's excuse for the shorten duration was she lost track of time. How is it possible for a producer with tens years of experience to make this simple mistake? Cameras have timers and she should have been able to keep track of the scene's length.
She also charged me for the time. I paid the agreed amount within one or two days. I hold people to their words and policy. There is no excuse for not paying attention to time when she charges you for the scene's duration.
Cory Chase has a history of filming videos of 50 minutes and longer at her stores. Harley Quinn and Super Gurl Conversion is one of Cory's best films with 71 minutes and she is no rookie at filming long videos. During the time of my custom, she filmed two customs videos for over 45 minutes. I know those scenes were customs because her custom logo in the videos says "Cory Chase Customs".
Another strange excuse was she unable to interpret the fight scene. I wrote "epic fight" and somehow she thought this meant neither Supergirl could harm each other. Have you witnessed an epic fight between a superheroine and villain with neither party being able to hurt each other?
The video was released as Super Gurl vs Evil Super Gurl on her Clips4Sale store.
Errors in the first video.
- The scene is only 31 minutes long. This is 20 minutes shorter than the agreed and paid time.
None of the postions were as long as agreed.
Cory somehow interpreted Pink Kryptonite in the script and it was not in the script.
The fight scene was horrible. Cory interpreted the fight scene as neither Supergirl could harm each other and their punches bounce off each other.
Missing Lines - Supergirl says “I shouldn't enjoy this, but it feels so good.”
Missing Lines "Evil Supergirl says You just made yourself cum. How embarrassing."
Supergirl licks Evil Supergirl's pussy first. (incorrect order of events. See the script)
Supergirl says "I love you" first. (Incorrect order of dialogue.) Evil Supergirl is seducing Supergirl so Evil Supergirl says it first in the script.
Evil Supergirl reveals her cock after making Supergirl cum.
Second script with more details
[spoilers]Kissing – 10 minutes
Evil Supergirl licks Supergirl's pussy – 5 minutes
Supergirl licks Evil Super Girl's Pussy -5 minutes
Supergirl sucks Evil Supergirl's cock – 6 minutes
Evil Supergirl fucks Supergirl cowgirl -8 minutes
Doggy style -8 minutes
missionary -8 minutes
Total - 50 minutes
I want both ladies to keep their costumes and boots/heels on for the entire scene. I just want their tits and pussy exposed during sex.
Story
An Evil Supergirl from Universe 99 has invaded our universe. She has declared all out war and demands world leaders to surrender. She wants to rule both universes. Supergirl confronts her evil counterpart from another universe. Supergirl says “Your evil plan will not succeed. Justice always wins.”
The Supergirls clash in an epic battle. Evil Supergirl punches Supergirl, and Supergirl comebacks with her own punch. Next, Evil Supergirl slaps Supergirl and as before Supergirl slaps Evil Supergirl. Then, they attempt to use their heat vision, but they cancel each others' attacks.
Supergirl says “She is matching me move for move. I must find a way to defeat her.”.
Evil Supergirl says “I know how to beat you.” and blows a kiss at Supergirl. Superheroines cannot use pleasure attacks, but Super Villains like Evil Supergirl can use pleasure attacks.
Kissing and tit sucking– 10 minutes
Supergirl tries to punch Evil Supergirl, but Evil Supergirl blocks the punch. Evil Supergirl counters by pulling Supergirl to her and kisses her. Supergirl struggles to escape the kiss, but Supergirl cannot break free from the kiss. The supergirls start to make out. Evil Supergirl exposes Supergirl's tits and begins to suck them. Supergirl moans in pleasure. Supergirl says “Why can't I resist your touch?”. Evil Supergirl says “I am you. I know how to make you feel so good.”. They begin to kiss again. Then, Evil Supergirl forces Supergirl to suck her tits.
Supergirl says “You are so sexy.”. Evil Supergirl says “Of course I am. We're the same person.”.
Evil Supergirl licks Supergirl's pussy – 5 minutes
Evil Supergirl leads Supergirl to the couch and starts to lick Supergirl's pink pussy. Supergirl enjoys every moment. Supergirl says “I shouldn't enjoy this, but it feels so good.”. Supergirl cums. Evil Supergirl says You just made yourself cum. How embarrassing.”.
Supergirl licks Evil Super Girl's Pussy -5 minutes
Then, they switch places. Supergirl licks Evil Supergirl's pussy. Supergirl loves the taste of her pussy. Evil Supergirl cums shortly afterwards. Evil Supergirl seductively says “I love you supergirl”, and Supergirl says “I love you too.”. The supergirls kiss each other.
Supergirl sucks Evil Supergirl's cock – 6 minutes
Evil Supergirl is now super hot after cumming. She reveals her special super cock from her pussy and she wants to cum deep inside Supergirl to make her pregnant. She is going to use Supergirl to breed an evil army. Supergirl is too seduced to resist.
Supergirl sucks on the large cock. She enjoys sucking on Evil Supergirl's cock.
Evil Supergirl fucks Supergirl cowgirl -8 minutes
Then, Evil Supergirl fucks her counterpart. Supergirl rides Evil Supergirl's cock. Supergirl says “Your cock is amazing.”. Supergirl says “You've turned me into a super slut”
Evil Supergirl Fucks Supergirl in Doggy style -8 minutes
Evil Supergirl bends Supergirl over the desk for doggy style. Supergirl says “Fuck me harder.”.
Evil SuperGirl fucks Supergurl in missionary -8 minutes
Evil Supergirl begins to fuck Supergirl in missionary. Supergirl is broken into a super slut. Supergirl says “Please cum inside me,”. Evil Supergirl says “You're going to be the first woman to impregnate herself.”. Evil Supergirl cums deep inside of Supergirl. Evil Supergirl asks Supergirl to marry her and Supergirl is seduced into saying yes with a pussy full of cum. Supergirl is very weak and Evil Supergirl knocks her out with one last kiss. She carries Supergirl back to her universe.[/spoilers]
She kinda reshoot the video. She only filmed extra minutes and edited everything together. Surprisingly it works well, but I noticed key differences. Cory's nails are white in the original footage and the new footage shows Cory with red nails. Michele is only wearing one pair of earrings in the original footage and is wearing two pairs of earrings in the new footage. The differences in appearance in certain shoots is not a deal breaker.
She released the full 50 minutes scene as Evil Super Gurl vs Super Gurl - Rivals on her Clips4Sale store. The majority of issues were corrected. However, some problems remain present. I have a fetish from girls kissing and sucking each other tits. It was disappointment that the duration for that part was not corrected. The last error on the list is reused footage from the first film. She didn't attempt to correct this error.
I'm really disappointed that she missed these lines again "I shouldn't enjoy this, but it feels so good." and Evil Supergirl says You just made yourself cum. How embarrassing.”.
Errors not fixed in reshoot.
- Kissing scene was not as long as agreed.
Missing lines - Supergirl says “I shouldn't enjoy this, but it feels so good.”
Missing Lines "Evil Supergirl says You just made yourself cum. How embarrassing."
Supergirl says "I love you" first. (Incorrect order of dialogue.) Evil Supergirl is seducing Supergirl so Evil Supergirl says it first in the script.
Evil Supergirl reveals her cock after making Supergirl cum.
- Supergirl swings the first slap in the reshoot.
Positives:
The video has its good qualities. Cory Chase and Michele James were really into the scene and each other. They put on a good performance. Cory was more into her character as Evil Sueprgirl. Michele has a bubbly personality like Alli Rae, but a bit more bubbly.
The improved fight scene in the reshoot is a pretty good back and forth back. It starts to become really hot with both Supergirls slapping each other.
Evil Supergirl's costume is perfect. It looks like the poplar opposite of Supergirl's regular costume. Evil Supergirl's costume is black with silver stripes. Supergirl's costume was okay. I prefer Cory's other Supergirl from Harley Quinn and Super Gurl Conversion because it is a higher quality costume. The new costume has a cheap emblem. It looks like the emblem was painted on it.
The video has perfect picture quality in 1080 HD. The special effects are really good. The laser struggle looked very good and the effects of the special portal at the end looks good.
To be honest, other customers may enjoy the original video as they are unaware of the script and concepts for the costume video.
Last Thoughts
I would not recommend buying custom scenes from Cory Chase. She is not good at following direction of events and interpreting scripts. She charges by the duration (time) for a custom scene, but does not manage time well when filming. She has over ten years of experience in the adult industry and I expect more quality from a veteran producer. She should have the experience and skills to kept track of a scene's duration. She made some of the same mistakes in the reshoot or didn't attempt fix certain errors. I won't be ordering from Cory Chase again.
My experience is very disappointing. She produces a lot of good taboo videos, and her superheroine videos are either hits or misses. It is a shame she failed to meet my standards. I expect producers and studios to provide at least everything from the script. I never ask for anything unreasonable such as stunts that could injury models or extreme sex acts such as double stuffing.