I think the concept is not that bad. To me, the problem here is much more because of the artist. I think that art comes from the same guy behind Batman White Knight, but, as far as I know, that guy won't draw the new Batgirl.
This is a version of Batgirl (Ed Benes) with an eye mask and you can see the difference:
![Image](https://i.imgur.com/GdPVeJy_d.jpg?maxwidth=640&shape=thumb&fidelity=medium)