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Thanks tallyho for all the excellent support, helping me with some great extra writing knowledge. This story is a joined together combination of various small pieces, I have written over the years in post form around the net, and rewritten with a lot more action added!
I have read so many excellent battle action forum superheroine stories which have been very inspiring, especially tallyho's awesome part-one of "BERSERKER" & Free---Fall's brilliant story, "Miss America-Rising-Sun!" Wonder Girl & Supergirl continue the same level of might, performing fantastic gymnastic abilities and great fight moves against Luthor & her gang of criminals, in this new three-part superheroine battle action story.
Supergirl is bold kicking ass in her regular costume. My Wonder Girl character creation is very similar to Drusilla from the "70's ABC-Season-One Wonder Woman TV show," but with a few changes. She is a different person who is older & taller with the same superpowers & slightly different costume. She is a young looking woman called Donna, who is a part-time secretary at the Mayor's Office and a superheroine with a lot more experience, fighting crime, fighting skills, and overall confidence.
I have created a few superheroine artworks of different parts of the story & will place them at the end of each chapter.
Hope you are entertained with my first story at the forum!
"Superheroines Battle at the Factory"
Chapter-One
To the faint sound of fire truck sirens, a gorgeous blonde office woman called Kara runs along a secluded hallway up high on the 18th floor of a Metro City skyscraper. She unbuttons her office shirt at super-speed transforming into her beautiful Supergirl costume. In half a second the superheroine jumps through an open window, flying up into the sky like an arrow from a bow towards a burning & smoke billowing building, a few miles away.
In a few milliseconds she zooms in through an open doorway to a gentle landing then walks bravely into the fire. She opens her mouth blowing out a super-freeze white cloud of air instantly extinguishing all the flames, saving an entire block of apartments before anyone has a chance to get injured.
Some of the apartment tenants & firefighters are cheering, along with a few TV news teams that are filming from the street below. She smiles, lifting her right arm then instantly flies off like a bird into the sky at high speed, to begin a patrol of Metro City.
For about half an hour everything is calm with no problems. Suddenly she looks down over a road & sees a huge thug quickly grab something out of an old woman's hand. Briskly he runs off down a back alley.
"HEY, STOP THIEF!" The lady shouts.
Instantly Supergirl zooms down landing in front of the bothered woman. "Are you okay," Supergirl said.
"Some guy just stole my purse." She said.
The Girl of Steel rests both hands on her shapely hips. "I'll get it back for you, please just sit over there on that public bench for a little while." She said.
"Sure okay." The old lady said kindly, as she slowly walks over & comfortably sits down then begins looking at her mobile phone internet TV channel, while a nearby fruit shop owner is stacking watermelons on display.
Like the wind, Supergirl launches herself up & flew down the ally as the huge thief comes into view. He is running very fast about 500 metres away through a busy intersection, and entering into another alley.
In a millisecond, she zooms past the goon & lands hard on the ground in front of him crouched, then quickly straightens & folds her arms crossed resting them on her chest. Immediately he stops running being completely startled looking at her.
"You have something that belongs to an elderly woman, hand it over, now," Supergirl said.
"I don't know what you are talking about." He said.
She quickly searches his body with her super-x-ray vision locating the woman's property in half a second. The superheroine jumps forward speedily landing close, lifting her left hand opening his jacket pocket, pulling out the stolen purse.
"You're going for a ride, asshole," Supergirl said.
Instantly she grabbed hold of his belt buckle with her free hand, lifting him off the ground a few inches.
"HEY," the goon shouts as Supergirl jumps up at super-speed flying into the sky. In moments she lands with a loud thud at the Metro City Police Station, pushing him through the front doors towards the desk policeman.
"I caught this man after he robbed an old lady a few blocks away." She said.
"Thank you, Supergirl." An officer said walking up to the thug.
"Your welcome, sir." She said, as he quickly handcuffs the thug & begins questioning him.
The Girl of Steel casually walks off pushing the doors open, jumping into the air, & rapidly flies for a couple of milliseconds. She lands softly in front of the old lady.
"Here is your purse." Supergirl said.
"Oh, thank you, dear." The lady said, cheerfully as she looks up with a smile on her face.
A young male fruit shop owner nearby smiles at Supergirl while she quickly winks her right eye back at him & smiling.
"Enjoy the rest of your day, goodbye." Supergirl kindly said, jumping into the sky flying off at the speed of light into outer space.
Supergirl zooms around the beautiful blue Earth several times enjoying the astronomical views, listening with her super-hearing for anything that might be of concern, twisting her body slightly as she flew. Suddenly a truck hits a heap of broken bottles smashed all over a busy London City road, as both front tyres burst.
The superheroine hears a couple of loud bangs, then a screeching sound and a few large crash sounds. Instantly, she zooms into Earth's atmosphere at super-speed. In a couple of seconds, she looks down beneath her a few hundred metres, & sees a massive truck skidding off the road driving out of control, hitting parked cars and heading for the edge of a cliff face.
The truck smashes through a fence going over the side, and Supergirl zooms down under the massive vehicle lifting it back up onto the road gently. She turns left & quickly opens her mouth releasing a flash of air at super-speed, blowing all the broken bottle pieces across the street into a gutter, in a millisecond.
The big old trucker sticks his head out of the driver side window.
"Thank you." He says, with a smile on his face while Supergirl walks towards him smiling just as a sudden breeze lifts her short red skirt, for a couple of seconds.
"Glad to be of service sir & by the way you better get some new front tyres," Supergirl said, then flew away up into the sky.
Moments later at mid-day Supergirl enters into U.S.A airspace. Suddenly she hears a computer voice message through her ear communicator from the Justice Centre saying she needs to make a quick patrol out to a possible criminal base. The data system provides her with all the job details.
She acknowledges & flies at super-speed towards the location. On the horizon, she can see lightning striking down & many dark grey clouds headed her way. She zooms across 500 miles of the skyline to arrive deep in the National Forest, at the site of an abandoned timber factory, in a few seconds.
Supergirl flies around & over the industrial shed building complex using her super-x-ray vision. Looking down she sees an evil villainess woman known as Luthor, surrounded by lots of stacked boxes, loaded with millions of dollars. About 25 guys are lifting more cash loaded boxes near a parked truck with a long trailer, carrying a money printer machine.
"Hey, this factory is supposed to be abandoned, what's going on here?" She thought to herself.
The Girl of Steel zooms down & lands at the front entrance with great force, cracking the ground under her red thigh high stiletto boots. She quickly walks forward kicking the front steel doors, smashing them down.
Supergirl enters the factory noticing a few old car wrecks & several wall fans spinning. She can hear a faint humming sound as she walks around to the otherside of a massive stack of boxes, Luthor & the 25 thugs come into view again.
Instantly some guys drop boxes they are carrying onto the floor, & others stop staring at the beautiful young woman. She puts her hands on hips, standing 5'7" tall in height, with sexy long blonde wavy hair, strutting her gorgeous tight spandex superheroine costume with an amazing emblem on her stunning chest.
They instantly recognize her from a live TV news flash at the Metro City Hall a few weeks earlier. Wonder Girl and Supergirl were seen receiving a medal of honour from the Mayor, for being the best superheroines for the year, who stopped the most crime. Both superheroines were surrounded by thousands of people, pointing cameras and taking photos. Hundreds of international TV network teams filmed as they stood with hands on hips looking glamorous, smiling proudly while the massive crowd applauded.
Quickly they all grab their guns & start shooting at her, and machine guns start booming, pistols & double barrel shotguns, all the gunfire bounces off her chest as she keeps walking towards them.
"THE FAKE MONEY GAME IS OVER, LUTHOR," Supergirl shouts.
Instantly the Girl of Steel leaps across the dusty floor promptly grabbing a machine gun off Luthor, crushing it with her bare hands. The thugs stop shooting for a few moments, then once again start rapidly firing at Supergirl. The evil villainess has a few seconds cover, as she runs away through a doorway.
The powerful superheroine's eyes glow red as she turns left shooting out her heat vision melting a few thugs machine guns as they quickly let go. She turns right & continues shooting out her powerful glowing red heat beams destroying more.
Pretty soon all the guns in the factory have been turned to liquid metal or have run out of bullets. Two big men run towards Supergirl & throw a punch, as she sidesteps them both with super-speed. The superheroine picks the goons up roughly by their jackets, throwing them into a shed wall, crashing down, out cold.
She looks to her right as three men run towards her swinging steel bars. Instantly the superheroine swings her right fist knocking the bars flying as she moves her left strong leg into a powerful roundhouse kick, smashing the men through a window. They fall screaming, outside the factory.
The rest of the men look at Supergirl standing with her arms folded crossed.
"WHERE DID LUTHOR GO?" Supergirl shouts, with authority as the men say nothing.
"So you don't want to talk, fine." She says.
Quickly she opens up her beautiful mouth wide using her super-breath powers, blasting out a huge white cloud of air like a whirlwind, crashing ferociously into the large group of guys. They all scream and slide across the factory floor crashing into boxes and drums.
Supergirl looks to her left and immediately becomes suspicious, noticing a blue light coming from behind a stack of boxes on the other side of the factory. She turns around and leaps 8 metres super-fast into mid-air landing smoothly. She can see a small glowing blue rock sitting on a bench in front of her.
"How fascinating." She thought to herself.
Suddenly in an instant, she realizes the small glowing blue rock is just a mere distraction as a thug quickly walks out from behind some boxes. He surprises her firing a laser gun, releasing a bright green electrical beam hitting into her emblem.
"UGGGHH." She yells loudly while being thrown down roughly onto her back. He quickly fires again, immediately she takes evasive action & swiftly rolls to the left getting up into a crouched position. The heavy blast hits some boxes behind her vaporizing them, she nervously looks around in shock.
Supergirl nastily jumps forward like lightning ripping the gun from his hands, crushing it into a ball then turns left & throws it smashing through a wall. She tries to use her heat vision, but her eyes just flash red for a couple of seconds.
"What did you just do to me?" She said.
"The prototype laser weapon I just blasted you with, was powered with lab-made kryptonite that will stay in your system for about 6 hours." He said laughing.
"YOU SLIME BALL." She yells, punching him unconscious.
The Girl of Steel steps back in shock as the guys start getting back up off the floor. Like the wind, she zooms off the ground towards the factory roof in an attempt to escape her perilous situation, but her flying powers only work partially for about half a second.
"AAAARRRHHH," Supergirl screams, falling heavily onto a heap of cardboard boxes breaking her fall.
A few of the guys who have already got back up to their feet, watch her laying face down with her skirt up around her waist for about 10 seconds. She slowly stands back up.
Her superpowers have disappeared for a while, but she isn't feeling weak like usual when being exposed to kryptonite. There is still a fair amount of strength left in her very fit athletic body, & she has strong knowledge of combat skills.
Supergirl stands in front of all the thugs as two men jump at her. She sidesteps & kicks a low roundhouse kick knocking both men to the floor. Two more thugs run punching at her, in a second she jumps up performing a full mid-air twist & forward-flip landing behind them.
She quickly throws a few kicks sending them flying into a group of 6 other guys, as they all descend awkwardly to the floor. Supergirl turns around to see a man holding a steel baseball bat. She moves quick ducking his swing, and stands up swiftly decking him with a hard left and right. Her short red skirt flicks up to reveal her sexy tight ass.
The superheroine jumps back a few feet as the crowd closes in, suddenly two men grab her from behind while a thug with a bat moves in to take a hit. She kicks him in the face knocking him out cold, and quickly performs a forward roll throwing the two men sliding off her crashing down.
Without warning her red cape blows upwards jamming into a metal wall fan, tearing a large piece off. She looks around surprised just as three more thugs punch her left & right, as she takes the blows.
"UGHHH, UGH, UGHH," Supergirl yells.
She quickly ducks another punch rolling left, and stands to return a combination of solid hits sending the men flying into a wall harshly. Suddenly Luthor returns, walking through a doorway with some more goons pointing loaded pistols at the Girl of Steel.
"GIVE UP, OR I WILL SHOOT YOU, SUPER BITCH," Luthor shouts, walking up to her fast then throws a hard right punch knocking the surprised blonde down onto the ground.
"UGHHH," Supergirl yells!
The villainess kicks her in the stomach several times as her skirt rides up for a few moments.
"OOOOHHHOHH." She moans rolling around covered in dust & grime.
Luthor clicks her fingers, immediately a group of huge men grab onto Supergirl's arms, lifting the superheroine roughly while another thug pushes a chloroformed soaked white rag onto her nose & mouth.
"OOOHH, OOHH, MMMPPPHH." She mumbles.
Supergirl's right-hand breaks free pushing back against a huge guys chest, while she viciously kicks two thugs, sending them flying. Another thug quickly grabs onto her short red skirt, as it tears into pieces ripping off her amazing blue long-sleeved leotard, while she struggles against all of them.
"MMMPPPHH." She yells into the rag continuously.
A few minutes later her pretty blue eyes roll back fluttering for a second, & her eyelids close down as she passes out. They drag her across the factory floor through a doorway, into an old cage mining elevator, that Luthor's guys fixed good as new.
Luthor walks in after them & presses a button on the elevator wall. Two steel doors slide together slamming closed, as they descend extremely fast. The guys on the factory floor run over to the parked truck, & climb up into the trailer without delay, then hold tightly onto the railing. The driver turns the ignition, pressing the accelerator pedal against the metal, driving off at high speed down into a descending underground tunnel.
About ten minutes later, Supergirl awoke dazed. Her red thigh high boots chained to the floor, while her wrists are shackled pulling her arms straight on either side above her head firmly. Luthor & 23 guys stand in front of the captured superheroine, in an underground criminal base. Bright fluoro lights are shining above.
"We had our scientist make us the lab made kryptonite laser gun just in case you ever showed up - so when we put the real thing on you, it can work so much better," Luthor said.
The evil villainess holds up a real glowing piece of kryptonite encased onto a chain necklace.
"OHHH, YOU BASTARDS." The Girl of Steel shouts, feeling weak & powerless recognizing the real thing.
"Now we are going to teach you a lesson for messing up our business so many times in the past," Luthor says, running her free hand over the superheroines mighty chest.
"STOP THIS AT ONCE," Supergirl shouts, demandingly as her beautiful blue eyes beam at Luthor.
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"Oh girl, this is only the beginning," Luther says, with a malevolent grin ripping open Supergirl's costume.
"YOU CAN'T DO THIS." The distressed superheroine shouted — many hours pass.
Just another ordinary day, Wonder Girl is out on patrol walking the Metro City streets looking for any sign of criminal activity. Her golden tiara with a red star at its centre shines on her forehead in the sunlight. Suddenly in the distance, she hears a few gunshots, there is a tall building blocking her path.
She quickly runs and jumps straight up 50 metres into mid-air somersaulting six times to land gracefully, standing on the otherside in the next street. About a mile away Wonder Girl can faintly see a group of three criminals, having a shootout with a security guard in front of the Metro City Bank. Another security guard is laying on the ground unconscious behind him.
The Amazon runs in a flash of super-speed along the street towards the shootout crime scene, in seconds she arrives very close behind them. Swiftly she unclips her golden magic lasso from her golden power belt with her left hand while looping the golden rope to the other.
"YOU'RE ALL GOING TO JAIL." Wonder Girl shouts with attitude. They all quickly look around completely startled to see the gorgeous superheroine with luscious brunette shoulder length hair, wearing a beautiful strapless spandex leotard costume.
The bright red half is spangled with white stars running across the right top side & red stars across the top left side holding down her very attractive voluptuous breasts firmly. The lower half is a magnificent royal blue colour. She has short silver bracelets that have a small red star at the centre of both.
Like lightning, she double snap kicks a thug & villainess in the stomach with her sexy red knee-high stiletto boots, as they both drop their guns & fall harshly onto the street unconscious. Wonder Girl speedily throws out her golden magic lasso catching the last thug around his waist as he instantly feels the rope send a mild but painful electric pulse through him.
"AHHH." He yells.
"Drop the gun," She says as he lets go of his pistol.
"Why were you and your pals shooting at the security guards?" Wonder Girl said.
"We were going to rob the Metro City Bank." He said.
All of a sudden lots of Police cars ringing their sirens followed by a few TV news vans full of reporters speed towards them and pull up in front of Wonder Girl. They all start getting out of their vehicles slamming doors, and a few TV news camera teams start filming.
The superheroine uncoils her lasso off the thug and swiftly reattached it to her power belt, then hands him over to about ten police officers walking towards her.
"Thanks for your help Wonder Girl." One of the security guards said.
"I'm just doing my job." She said, proudly standing with both hands resting on her strong athletic hips while a crowd of people from nearby shops arrive and cheer! The police arrest the attempted bank robbers, a few seconds pass by then Wonder Girl runs off down the street at super-speed.
Hours later Wonder Girl returns to the Justice Centre. She walks into the leisure room and sits down on her favorite sofa to watch some TV for a little while. A news break comes on as reporters praise Supergirl for saving a burning apartment block, another story comes on with news readers praising Wonder Girl for stopping another bank robbery, the 35th this year.
The mighty Amazon walks off and decides to have a relaxing shower. A few minutes pass by then an amazingly beautiful looking young woman steps out of the shower clean and refreshed. Her name is Donna, she has a secret identity as a part-time secretary at the Mayor's Office and the life of a powerful superheroine fighting crime the rest of her time.
She casually lifts both arms out straight on either side. Swiftly Donna spins to her right creating an energy field with a sound of thunder then a flash of red then white & blue lights, transforming her KA...BOOM into Wonder Girl. The superheroine feels the power rush through her as she puts hands on hips dressed in a clean, tight-fitting beautiful costume.
In half a second, an emergency call alert siren starts beeping above, as Wonder Girl quickly runs along a white marble corridor super-fast until she enters the communication room. A red alert sign is flashing on the computer monitor.
She presses the enter-key and all the details come up. Five hours ago Supergirl flew away on patrol to an abandoned timber factory deep in the National Forest to investigate a possible criminal base. The superheroine protection system has detected Supergirl's ear communicator GPS signal disappeared one minute ago!
Suddenly new updated information flashed up on the screen. A system data scan has revealed there is an abandoned gold mine underneath the factory with many deep underground tunnels. Wonder Girl is immediately worried about her very close friend Supergirl. The entire Justice Centre is unattended except for Wonder Girl, and all the other superheroes are out on jobs as the crime rate has been rising over the last couple of decades.
The Amazon walks off steadily along a series of corridors until she reached the aircraft storage bay. Instantly Wonder Girl's state of the art piece of jet technology performs a security heat signature scan acknowledging her identity as the automatic door opens lifting up.
She quickly runs up the staircase into the cockpit and sits down in the control seat clicking her seatbelt on. The door shuts down while she presses the invisible-auto-pilot-mode button. She quickly types into the control panel computer that she is on route flying her jet to the location indicated on the system details in the search for Supergirl.
She presses send as the message begins transferring via satellite to the central Justice Centre computer information system. She pushes the ignition-button as the powerful engines roar lifting the white coloured jet up several metres, hovering for a couple of seconds while the gates open.
Then in an instant Wonder Girl zooms out then up and away at Mach 3. About 15 minutes pass as she flew across 570 miles of the stormy skyline. Her jet begins to slow down and hovers at 10,000 feet above the central area of the National Forest.
Wonder Girl presses the manual-pilot-control button grabbing hold of the control stick pushing it slowly forward, the jet vertically descends steadily. She locates a flat and clear grassy landing zone within close walking distance from the factory entrance, landing smoothly.
Wonder Girl thought to herself. "I better play it safe."
She quickly reached over and pressed the heat-signature-scan button engaging a search for the presence of anything alive within 300 hundred metres. It's starting to get late in the afternoon as she looks around the location for any possible danger, the scan comes up all clear.
Wonder Girl quickly unclips her seat belt and stands as the jet door opens lifting up. She swiftly walks down the staircase onto a field covered in 3-foot high wet grass, making her way towards the factory as the wind blows heavily. Simultaneously the jet door shuts down, while an automatic shield around her invisible jet is engaged.
In only a few moments she arrives to see an old car wreck near a couple of buckled & bent metal doors, laying on a large dark bitumen clearing that is heavily cracked.
She enters through the front entrance into a massive shed & sees more car wrecks. Her boots click each step in a sexy kind of rhythm as she walks and begins to investigate. The Amazon looks up to see many fluoro lights above her powered by a generator box on the far end wall making a light humming sound. The cement floor is dusty with lots of cardboard boxes and drums stacked at random locations. There is plenty of weeds and junk around the place.
"This factory isn't abandoned." She thought for a moment. The superheroine quickly rips open a few boxes to see unbelievable amounts of money inside, suspecting all the boxes in the factory must be full of cash.
Looking over along the far left shed wall she notices several wall fans are spinning. She can see two steel staircases going up to the height of about 6 metres, leading to several platform levels made of besser blocks. There is lots of old large pieces of wood and machinery alongside some different size containers on each level.
The superheroine immediately notices something as she looks over to the right side of the factory. Instantly she leaps sideways about 10 metres into mid-air super-fast and lands firmly. She sees a large piece of Supergirl's torn cape, jammed inside an old metal wall fan. Just below are some torn pieces of her red skirt laying on the ground, near two unconscious thugs. Wonder Girl is now even more concerned for the safety of her close friend.
TO BE CONTINUED
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