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Ahh, the old "cousin Jimmy in the fake cop uniform" trick. That "yous" gave him right away, but just a bit too late for BG, eh?

Wonderful fight scenes, Tallyho and I did enjoy how Batgirl had trouble handling herself without her confidence. Looking forward to more.

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If that girl doesn't have the classic look and shape of Supergirl, I don't know who does.

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Thank you Tallyho and Kingles for your most effusive praise. It's my pleasure to write and when I get such positive feedback, it certainly motivates me to write more. :yahoo: Anyway, I'm busy working on the next chapter and hope to have this full story finished up by the end of April, possibly soone...

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 20 The tall Frenchman gets down on one knee behind his Amazon captive so he can control her body from behind more easily, more completely. He grips the end of the lasso in his left hand keeping the cord taut and pulling Wonder Woman backward aga...

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For me, I am tired of the chloroform thing but ko by gas or darts are okay. Even a straight ko by punch or surprise blow to the head is okay.

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This was a nice slow unwinding story. Could have used a bit more resistance up front but other than that, a fun tale. Thanks.

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That Mia is one tall drink of cool water!

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Excellent story. Powergirl is not having a good day but the rest of us are.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 19 When Wonder Woman takes a quick glance down behind her, Pascal plays his ace in the hole. His hard, bony knee cap drives up into her crotch with all the force he has inside him. “HUUUUNNGGGHHHH!” Wonder Woman’s eyes bulge in their sockets and...

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Really enjoying this. Excellent peril and terrific detail.

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This is too good to not finish the trilogy, right?

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 18 Wonder Woman is sitting on the top of the elevator cabin in the dark elevator shaft as the car moves slowly downward. She’d pushed the button for the basement and quickly climbed up through the service door in the cab’s roof, grimacing with t...

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Tallyho -- I have to say, though I came late to the party on this series of yours, I am enthralled with what you've done. Great scenes, great peril, excellent characters in believable fight scenes over and over. Stellar work.

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Solved the problem by deleting and reloading my browser. A bug on my end. Thanks.

Now if you can help me by splitting my story into a second page on the newly posted Part 17, I'd much appreciate it. Or let me know how I can do it myself in the future if need be. Thanks so much.

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Provocative beginning. I look forward to more.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 17 Dressed back in her street clothes after a flashing, spinning change in an empty ladies room in a sparsely populated Metro station on a Sunday morning, Diana Prince has made her way to Chevy Chase and stands just down the street from Dr. Rene...

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No, I mean I can't see it on my desktop computer. No number of views oval is shown.

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I'm not sure what happened but suddenly the number of readers of a posted story or thread topic is no longer being shown on my screen. What happened?

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I agree with Valik 10, that she looks like she'd be a good Power Girl, but disagree with TIEnTEEZ that there can never be too many Supergirls.

But if not those, consider Sue Storm, Invisible Woman.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 16 It is the middle of the night, just approaching 3:00 a.m. when Doctor Rene Pascal returns to his basement laboratory. Since 11:50 p.m. Destiny has been at the mercy of the stimulation catsuit and the electric fucking machine. She is completel...

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Hi Bare_thighz, I said I would give your story more thought and I have. I think your writing is really excellent and wonderfully specific and I only offer these suggestions/criticisms to aid you in your development. I re-read this story to get a clear picture of what bothered me about it and it wasn...

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The costume may not be so imposing but this beautiful Cheetah has still won my heart.

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It's definitely darker than most stories here. (Believe me, I know 'cause I write them very dark myself.) I need a day or two to process this story. It's well-written and all but there's something missing and I'm not sure what that is. I think the ending is very sad in its way. I'll get back to you ...

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 15 Pascal walks up to the rubber-clad blonde heroine sagging heavily over the stained leather cylinder made slick with her bodily fluids. After turning off the electric fucking machine which is between fucking cycles for the moment, Pascal unloc...

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Thank you, Tallyho. I appreciate the support. Plenty more peril to come, with lots of it centering on WW from here on out.

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While I normally don't go for role play "stories" because of their structure, this one is really too good to pass up.

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Very nice "mood" piece and I'd be interested in seeing you taking it further, if you're so inclined. First person done well isn't easy and this works.

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This was an intriguing frame for a story. I just wish it wasn't so spare in the details.

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I agree, this story offers a different spin than the usual and is going nicely. Good descriptions of the action throughout. More please.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 14 The aphrodisiac worked its way into Destiny’s mind with the directness of a summer storm, drenching her thoughts with the purpose for which it was designed. Within six minutes of its application to her facial pores, the blonde Bylangian was d...

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I like to vary it in my stories. But it is usually from the heroine's point of view; either third (more often) or first person. Occasionally I take it from the villain's viewpoint. Like a comic panel, I try to think of which viewpoint will best get across the moment of peril without jerking the read...

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Good fight scene.

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I'm liking this. It's different. It's got a sexy female villain and it's intriguing. So yes, definitely write more.

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Thanks psiber8 for checking in. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Will Destiny follow her sister heroines down the same road to a tragic end or worse yet, become a pawn in Pascal's cruel plan to capture Wonder Woman? Or maybe a little of both? The answers are forthcoming shortly.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 13 Destiny feels completely helpless because she is. Her wrists are bound behind her back with titanium chains. Her costume panties have been pulled down to her thighs and she’s resting on the standing Battle Axe’s pelvis, his dick thrust up dee...

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Here are a few: Are you usually this wet right off the bat? You're not opposed to anal sex, are you? Oh, was this the moment you were expecting to escape? Of course it feels good, you types never deal with pleasure as well as pain. You don't want me to stop, do you? Is there anyone in particular you...

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 12 Thanks, Tmon for the nice words. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And to others who are as well, I'd love to hear from you. Now let's get on with the story. A powerful hand grabs her collar from behind and just as Destiny turns her head ha...

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I've enjoyed your first two films and look forward to the third. Traditionally, blue kryptonite affects Bizarros like green kryptonite affects Superman, Supergirl, etc. I believe "Smallville" introduced the idea of blue kryptonite painlessly eliminating Kryptonian powers. Here's the smallv...

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Do it by PM to avoid spoilers and just keep control by saying yea or nay to the ideas you want.

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This thread should be in the Superheroine Lounge section, no? You'll get more responses there.

The usual:
Tireless machines are always a good bet.
Aphrodisiacs

The unusual:
Kinky fetishes from feet to earlobes to intense nipple play

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Nice one, Tallyho. Wished there was a bit more danger but it was all done well and neatly concluded.

Hmm. A short story. Not sure I'm capable of it.

Anyway, glad you're feeling better.

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This is getting better and better.

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I also put in my vote for Livewire.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 11 “Miss Prince, I don’t know what to say,” Detective Sal Abato says over the phone after she lays out her concerns about Dr. Pascal to him, pleased to be able to share her doubts and suspicions about the man. “I’m just fuckin’ shocked you didn’...

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I could be wrong but I got the impression on the Gold Kryptonite that one reboot or another put the power loss at 24 hours rather than the old-school permanent factor. I never like that permanence aspect. Of course there's always red kryptonite with it's unexpected effects. As in the film SM where i...

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Kryptonite dust in those lungs would be quite devastating.

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Enjoying the set up. All technical and stuff. Ooohh.

But seriously, get yourself better and then write. Unless you're bored to tears. Either way, it's always fun to read you.

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This is an intriguing beginning and I hope you continue it. A heroine with depression is a very interesting construct. I look forward to seeing where you take it.

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Wonder Woman and the Superheroine Serial Killer - Pt. 10 As she’s hoisted to her feet, a woozy Destiny can’t even keep her legs from buckling and Battle Axe has to wrap one hand around her waist while the other holds her wrist with the blonde’s limp arm pulled around his shoulder. “...you...bastard...

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Really enjoyed this. I do feel that the ending needs a little more finality to it, but other than that, a fun read. Thanks.

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