The Ultimate Superheroines Forum

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For me, it was Sheen Queen of the Jungle, I was about 12, and here was this BEAUTIFUL woman, clad in skimpy animal skins who could commune with animals AND become one. In one Episode they trapped Sheena in her Lioness form, and HUNTED her, actually "Darting" her and putting her in a cage, ...

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Section 1 Part 3 Serious vs Campy Everyone KNOWS what you mean. Ok, Now you have decided to write for yourself (in which case you likely just want to write what you write) or to really get into something people like. In my opinion, you should next decide whether you want something SERIOUS (I take th...

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. I don't agree with the learning without pain part. It never worked for me, ever, in any circumstance.No pain, no gain. I believe it's a rule as universal as the laws of physics. Yes but the pain in this context is the sacrifice of your time to read the tips in the first place as opposed to experi...

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I believe you are way overthinking here :laugh:. I imagine most people write precisely about what they like. For example, I've seen "pregnancy stories" in other places, but I guess they just didn't make it out here yet (or maybe they are posted and I haven't noticed them). As for the writ...

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I think some of that comes down to the seriousness of the tone of the story. Some stories are deliberately trashy and unrealistic so as to make it plainly fantasy and not too serious. I think that filter takes some of the sting out of it if some people don't want it to be too 'real', which I respec...

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See, I'm interested in this. I think you've implied before that there are things that have been done to death and totally saturated 'the market' to the point that they're really boring. I'm a little embarrassed, because I read and write quite a lot in this genre, but I'm honestly not sure what eleme...

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See the biggest question I've had to ask myself before writing something here is what to call the superheroines. I am rubbish with names. Also just how much violence constitutes too much. Other than that, umm, I figured I'd just take a run at it and see what folks think. I actually write about the ...

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I like T's idea for a potential sub forum with writing ideas from different contributors. Though... there is a certain hubris I'd be worried about to ever dare to act as an authority on how these things ought to be done - so I much prefer just weighing in as a humble opinion on how I personally fee...

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I think the reason you haven't provoked discussion is because you are making statements not really posing questions. And for the most part your comments are fairly comprehensive so there isn't much to be said. I take your above statement as high compliment indeed. Thank you Tally. I had not thought...

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I think If I put this all in one thread, the different discussions would be "lost' so far i have generated zero discussion :/ Writing your Fanfic A series by Lordgriffin December 6, 2014 GETTING STARTED (Section 1 of 6) (Part 2 of 8) If your writing for yourself, why are you posting to a web si...

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Writing your Fanfic A series by Lordgriffin December 3, 2014 FORWARD Hello All: Let me first apologize to those who have been following my Hunter of the Amazon (HOTA). We had an injury in the family when my 92-year-old grandmother fell and very badly injured her back. We are talking constant back sp...

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Man the DIALOGUE....does anyone ever talk like that in real life?

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There IS a Scene similar to that planned

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Really love this series . As ive said many times before. Hope she goes for a prego kit and has the shock of her life. A nice tamed amazon then Thanks. I am working on the next chapter now. My boggiest issue is things are going TOO easy for Actaeon, I have to figure out something to make things more...

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I really REALLY hate the whole...The Good Gal wins...AGAIN :(

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A few points of Clarification. First off I do not take offense, but I happen to really HATE the whole "big breasted sex and kill them' my own personal opinion is there is MUCH better things that can be done other then KILL the woman... However point of clarification. Thanks for what you said Vo...

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I like the refreshed layout for the story - it really sharpens it up. I appreciate that you took the time to clean it up, and it makes such a difference. I have to disagree with the judgement that nothing happens... Even if you limit your definition of 'things happening' to crime, sex, and death, t...

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I was really turned off thy the title "Death of Batgirl" I have always maintained that I dislike teasing, and well your writing is VERy good, Your descriptions outstanding, and your plot and logic very reasonable..but like the Title...the story was 9for me) a complete tease..nothing actual...

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Thanks! I wish I could get more comments and feed back

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Hunter of the Amazon Chapter 23 In the dimness of the Washington DC mansion, Wonder Woman stood naked at the foot of Actaeon’s bed, his clothing in her arms, while the mercenary hunter softly snored. His rape of her had released the tension of his day. The air felt cool against Diana’s skin as she s...

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Hello: I do not get mush feed back on MY stories, so I TRY to give deed back to others, I agree with Taly and the others, You do write descriptions VERY well, and I think you have the makings of a plot for an original character, who needs to be developed more. What absolutely killed it for me? once ...

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To my Loyal fans: Ok, as you see I am back, Grandma is doing better, and if all goes well by Friday, she will be on her way back home to Florida, which means a little less distraction of me, I hope. I hope you like this installment, I wanted to write longer but I want to make sure I get posted more....

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I know not many people comment here, but I really wish that people would post a serious story

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The story has a real lot of potential, i just wish you had not "copped out" with the constant almost exclusive anal thing, anal is good but a little variety....

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Ok I just HAVE to weigh in on this, Just me personally, I am SO SICK of Joker/Harley.... frankly I do not get it, When I am in bed with a female the LAST thing I want is Humor... Again I can only speak personally but there was nothing even mildly attractive about Joker...and the wild slap stick brut...

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Hunter of the Amazon Chapter 21 Diana exited the doctor’s office with a brown paper bag in her hand. Pushing her glasses up on her nose, she ducked her head -- ashamed as she tried to hurry away. The bag contained her panties and bra and as such she was grateful she had worn the business skirt and j...

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Hunter of the Amazon Chapter 20 Wonder Woman walked numbly from the Courthouse. Actaeon had moved like a master and she had badly underestimated him. Naturally with her super speed it was no problem to outrun the media seeking to question her, but she supposed it didn’t look good to see her dash off...

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Hunter of the Amazon Chapter 19 The Zamboli Republic, Africa: King Otwani sat on his throne smiling, relaxing as was his glistening ebony queen, Zenda; Lex Luthor, clad in a 1 piece black body suit, flanked his throne while Superman, now believing his name was Clay Winston, flanked his wife’s; all t...

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Hey Yer Welcome: You shoudl always write what YOU like, but another thing I neglected to comment on, I also enjoy that you do not "cop out" you actually have her GET defeated, your stories make logical sense, even if they are not MY "Kink triggers" Of course MY story is a bit LON...

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I think I wish you had written it where she could not bite down.....

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Hello: Well I like to "practice what I preach" in that I think it is highly...well rude, when people read stories, and do not reward the author with feed back, good or bad (I mean look at my story, 8,000 hits 13 replies and most of them are MY posting) Anyways enough about me....this is ab...

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The 2 week summit in China had passed with world wide praise; agreements had been reached with North Korea, China, India, Pakistan and Iran about nuclear disarmament beyond anyone’s wildest expectations, all credited to the U.S. President. Perino now stood at the stairway to Air Force one stark nake...

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I am kinda wondering, whatever happened to the latex penguin outfit he made for BG?

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Welcome again to any readers that have been following me. Here is my next chapter of the Saga, for those of you waiting to see more Wonder Woman; this chapter represents the journey back to Wonder Woman as the main focus. All the story parts have now been tied in for what I PLAN to do with the Amazo...

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Chapter 16 King Otwani sat his throne arrogantly in his ceremonial garb. The Muscular king looked like he had been chiseled out of onyx, grasping his spear in his right hand and the shield made from Sheena’s zebra in his left, the Mane form Sheena’s lion adorned his arms and legs as he discussed his...

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I had embedded pictures in this one, but I have no idea how to make the pictures SHOW here...

Also you may note I placed the whole story (to date) in one post, I was informed by a friend it was..considered rude to...post each chapter separate....

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I stress again the ONLY way for me to know, is feedback, my last 2 chapters only had 2 replies each. Feedback lets me know what people want/hope to see. I am not like others, I not only write for pleasure, part of my pleasure is hearing OTHERS who share my views (that a heroine need not ALWAYS win) ...

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Hunter of the Amazon Chapter 14 Out on the African savannah in the growing twilight, stood 4 figures, Barbara Ann Minerva- the British woman wracked with pain barely able to stand, Circe-Greed goddess of sorcery, Mr. Ping- the Whitehouse Press Secretary and the shaman, N’bid, though the young black ...

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Introduction: Ok once again it took time to get this out, but I am committed to NOT giving up. Quality over frequency. In this chapter, WW does not play a big sexual role I feel that is ok because she has been such a focus, and to make it BETTER I have to have set up, however never fear there IS ste...

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Hunter of the Amazon Chapter 12 Actaeon gave Diana two days of recovery time. The food was excellent, but it was the ONLY thing she had to look forward to. Only Actaeon would visit her as the notion took him, to have sex with her or to get his blow job. Diana was given no clothing and, as Hans had p...

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As Usual, I would ask any who read the story, to send Feedback to: LORDGRIFF0N@gmail.com It inspires me to write more. I like to include reader suggestions (in the story). Tell me what you liked, what did not work, what you’d like to SEE! I will include more as a Post Script so you can get to the ch...

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As before PLEASE if you liked my story, send feedback to LORDGRIFF0N@gmail.com Feedback, ideas, desires of things to see IS what keeps me going and inspired me; a few ideas in this chapter CAME from you my readers. I promise the next chapter will be a pleasant surprise NONE of you have seen coming. ...

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I had some GREAT responses from my last chapter, sorry it took so long to get this one out, but Real life was hectic. Some of you will note I used your suggestions. PLEASE keep the comments coming and the inspiration/suggestions. Send them to: lordgriff0n55@gmail.com Once again, my PROFOUND thanks t...

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Amazon Hunter Chapter 6 The journey, for Wonder Woman, was not a pleasant one. Lying over Actaeon’s lap over her friend Sheena’s withers, was not as easy as one might imagine from the American western movies. Diana’s weight on her own abdomen caused the muscles to fatigue, not to mention the humilia...

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Hunter of the Amazon Chapter 5 Sheena Queen of the jungle knelt in the warm steamy jungle before queen Zenda , her head under the Nubian queen’s loincloth, her mouth sealed to the colored woman’s soft velvety bare nether lips, her knees in the soft cool jungle loam. The taste of the king’s salty see...

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Hello all: Please send any feedback to: lordgiffin@wowway.com Amazon Hunter Chapter 6 The journey, for Wonder Woman, was not a pleasant one. Lying over Actaeon’s lap over her friend Sheena’s withers, was not as easy as one might imagine from the American western movies. Diana’s weight on her own abd...

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Hello all: Please send any feedback to: lordgiffin@wowway.com Amazon Hunter Chapter 6 The journey, for Wonder Woman, was not a pleasant one. Lying over Actaeon’s lap over her friend Sheena’s withers, was not as easy as one might imagine from the American western movies. Diana’s weight on her own abd...

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Acknowledgments Hello All, let me first say If you have comments or I have inspired you, I LIVE for feedback my e-mail is lordgriffin@wowway.com I next want to give a heartfelt thanks to Dr. D. For his help in editing, I would say 95% of the story is me, but now without the spelling and structural e...

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I remember and for once I'd like to see Slade WIN

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