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Caniac89

=D> Excellent start sir, please continue

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It had been 24 hours since Supergirl and Silver Osprey had brought Brent to the private hospital located on the Talon base. Since Talon often worked directly with various superheroes, the Talon staff at the hospital didn’t find it unusual that Supergirl and Silver Osprey had not left the facility. K...

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Outside, Solar Flare and Supergirl squared off. Jessica spoke first, “Tell me Supergirl, how does it feel to know that you failed to protect the city that welcomed you with open arms?” Kara didn’t flinch, despite the guilt and frustration swelling inside her. “Hell, you couldn’t even protect one man...

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Good stuff as always, well done sir

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Supergirl, Silver Osprey, and Andrew Steel were gathered in Andrew’s office. It had been nearly an hour since Sam and her brother had rescued Kara from Solar Flare. Once the two heroines had gotten back and told him what had happened, Andrew had set Talon’s intelligence specialists working overtime ...

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Thank you for the kind words sir. Will post next section later today.

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Fantastic story, you've got me on the edge of my chair. Can't wait for the next update.

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Agent Brent Hunter was searching the top floor of the two story automobile factory. Along with his sidearm and tactical gear, Hunter also carried a modified M4 rifle with a multipurpose launcher mounted under the barrel. Under normal circumstances, Brent would have arrived at the factory by helicopt...

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Despite regaining some of her strength, Supergirl still felt terrible. Her abs were still sore from the abuse taken at the hands of Solar Flare. Her vision was back to normal, but her eyes still stung. To top it all off, the blonde heroine had been fighting back tears for the past half hour. The tea...

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The return to consciousness was very unpleasant for Supergirl. Her abs were throbbing and her eyes still stung like hell. As she moaned and rolled onto her side, Kara was relieved, yet very surprised, to find that she wasn’t bound. Opening her eyes, Supergirl was treated to the blurry image of a ver...

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Kara and Sam were sitting in Kara’s apartment sipping tea. Kara had invited her newest friend to spend the day with her and for the past hour they had been swapping stories, mainly at Brent’s expense. “Did you see his face when we told him we had swapped secrets, he wasn’t surprised at all,” Sam tol...

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Sirens blared as fire trucks responded to the fires that had broken out. Unfortunately, a rather dangerous hazard prevented them from reaching the fires. The hazard came in the form of Jessica Patterson. Jessica had on a black sleeveless leotard, suntanned tights, black knee-high boots, and fingerle...

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Early the next morning, Brent and Sam were situated in Brent’s office in the Talon facility. Normally, civilians weren’t allowed on base. Thanks to Sam’s alter ego however, exceptions were made. Brent had given Sam a quick tour of the main building, and introduced her to Andrew Steele and Kristen Re...

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Brent Hunter lived in a very large modern-style house that was larger than most modern high schools. Brent could afford such a place because he had made some good investments early in life that had paid back exponentially. These investments allowed him to live pretty much whatever lifestyle he chose...

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Pictures of key Talon personnel.

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Again I must thank sgz6 for his terrific help in editing and for the use of one of his best villains It was a stormy night in Chicago. There was a sizeable downpour, along with the occasional flash of lightning. On the outer edge of the storm, a 737 airliner was just beginning landing preparations....

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Very good start, I like your writing style and am eagerly awaiting the next post.

Caniac89

well done sir =D>

Caniac89

very interesting, please continue

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=D> nice start sir, I can't wait for the next update. It was my pleasure to assist with this story, Silver Osprey is in good hands.

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Thanks for all the positive feedback guys. I have plenty of ideas for Silver Osprey in the future. BTW, if you have any requests for scenes, plots, etc feel free to pm me.

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Silver Osprey grunted as she pushed a chunk of reinforced concrete off her, revealing a very dusty night air. Out of seemingly nowhere, a hand reached down. Sam grasped the offered hand and pulled herself to her feet. Dust limited visibility as the figure who had helped the heroine guided her throug...

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nice update sir =D> can't wait for more

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Disclaimer: DO NOT attempt any of the procedures or diagnostics portrayed in this update. If you or someone you know is experiencing an emergency, dial 911 or your local emergency services. Do not attempt to treat/diagnose the problem unless you are a trained healthcare professional. and now, enjoy...

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Sam slowly emerged from her drug-induced sleep. The first thing she became aware of was that her wrists were bound together above her head and that she was hanging from them. Next, Sam realized that her feet were touching the ground. However, upon trying to stand, found that she was still extremely ...

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Suddenly, a loud splash caused the young heroine to whirl around. Sam was shocked to see an unnaturally long anaconda rise out of the water. Moving at a speed that Silver Osprey couldn’t match in her bewildered state of mind, the giant reptile lunged forward. Before Sam could react, the snake had wr...

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A very pissed off Silver Osprey ripped through the night sky. She had returned to her condo from a daytime patrol, only to find a note from Night Stalker. Silver Osprey, Yes, I know who you are. Relax, I haven’t told anyone, there is no point. Your ‘friend’ has been my guest for the day. Do not worr...

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As Sam and Mike waited for their food to arrive, they made small talk. Sam was so happy to be spending time with Mike that she never even considered the possibility that someone was watching her. Gina, dressed in her Night Stalker costume, had picked up Silver Osprey’s scent shortly after sunset. Us...

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Sam Hunter set down her notebook and brought her binoculars to her face, observing her specimen. A male osprey was fishing in the local reservoir and Sam was studying him. I wish I could be up there flying with you , Sam thought as she sighed. “Everything okay,” Mike Anderson asked. Sam had invited ...

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ooo, getting interesting. like Webswinger's new outfit and it's nice to finally put faces to Velocity, Vigor, and Fade. Can't wait for more.

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The nine-story building was ablaze, turning the night sky an eerie orange. An electrical short in a broken wire had turned the apartment building into a death-trap with several residents still inside. The building was surrounded by fire engines and ladder trucks. Several ambulances were also on scen...

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I just wanted to thank everyone for all the feedback you've given. Rest assured I've begun writing Silver Osprey's next tale and have several more ideas on the drawing board. Thank you again for being so encouraging.

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Very nice, for being homemade Webswinger's costume isn't bad and she's good looking to boot, can't wait to see what challenges you put your newest heroine through.

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Consciousness returned slowly to Sam. She noticed that she was lying on some kind of examination table and heard the soft humming of electrical equipment. Opening her eyes, the heroine was treated to a collection of blurry images. She blinked a few times and her vision cleared. She seemed to be in s...

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Confident that her accelerated healing would rid her body of the chloroform, Silver Osprey attacked. She started throwing a series of kicks and punches at the closest woman, a blonde. Because of the effects of the chloroform, combined with her being so focused on her target, Sam didn’t notice that t...

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Sam was sitting inside a Starbuck’s sipping coffee, waiting on her friend. She wore a white tank top, black shorts, and a pair of flip-flops. Her black and white hair hung down and just barely cascaded over her shoulders. A pair of stylish, wire-rimmed glasses helped conceal her bright blue eyes. Fi...

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It was a quiet spring evening for the residents of Raleigh, North Carolina. Most of the city’s inhabitants had retired to their homes, but a few were out enjoying the beautiful spring weather. The quiet atmosphere was suddenly shattered as an ambulance raced through the downtown streets, its lights ...

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thx for the kind words, really appreciate all the feedback

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On a private stretch of beach on the Florida coast. Kara reclined in a beach chair wearing a blue 2-piece bathing suit. Enjoying the view and late morning breeze, she let her mind wander. Anne and Allison were in the chairs to her right making small talk while Drew and Jessie mixed drinks. “You’re ...

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Now American Dream was getting both worried and impatient. It had been nearly an hour since she had made the phone call and it was close to midnight. The voice she had spoken to had promised a prompt response, so where was it. As if right on cue, Anne’s laptop beeped, she had another email. Again, t...

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The Sun had just set as the four super heroines were poised on a small hill. The vegetation on the top of the hill concealed the four girls as they observed the large Brain Trust building. “So how are we going to do this,” Lightspeed asked. “The first thing that has to happen is that the security sy...

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Consciousness returned slowly to Supergirl. She was aware that she was lying on a table of some type. Opening her eyes, Kara was treated to dark, fuzzy images. She tried to listen to her surroundings but the only thing she could hear sounded like the constant beeping of a heart monitor. Kara tried m...

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Supergirl arrived at the indicated spot with 6 seconds to spare. It was an area south of the Windy City and appeared to be void of any buildings or man-made objects. “I’m glad to see that you are still so predictable,” a familiar voice spoke. Kara turned around and immediately went into her power po...

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The Sun was just starting to rise as Wonder Girl made it back to Kara’s apartment. She had observed some interesting things at the Black Talon base that she was sure Kara would be interested in. Where is Kara anyway, Drew wondered. The apartment was empty and it looked as if no one had been in the e...

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60 miles south of Chicago, in a very large industrial building, Mary Patterson picked up her office phone. Victoria was on the other line, “Mary, I just received a very upsetting report, give me one good reason why I should not have you replaced.” Victoria’s tone was very cold. “Mitch, the so-called...

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Glad ya like, post next segment tomorrow

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That night, Supergirl and Wonder Girl had their hands full. Kara had told her friend what she had discovered in her interview. Drew had offered to keep an eye on the Black Talon base tonight so Kara could patrol the city. After agreeing with Drew’s plan, Supergirl sped downtown to start her patrol. ...

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Kara stepped out of the cab as it stopped in front of the main entrance. She wore a grey blouse that hid the blue Kryptonian fabric she had on underneath. She had on a darker business skirt that ended just above her knees, hiding a certain red mini skirt underneath. Although her skin-tone tights wer...

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Mary Patterson was enjoying the view from her office window. The Mediterranean was always beautiful this time of the morning. The gorgeous brunette loved working from the Trust’s French beach house. Her position within the organization definitely had its advantages. Mary was wearing a grey blouse an...

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This is a story I have wanted to read for a long time and since no one else was making it, I decided I would write it. As it stands, the story is completely finished but ended up being much longer than I anticipated. Therefore, I will be posting it in segments. Please bear in mind that this is my f...

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