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RavenClaw

another great chapter, love the throwback with the other villains, can't wait to see what you come up with next...

RavenClaw

curious to see what you have planned for this

RavenClaw

This feels like a Episode of Scooby doo meets DC featuring Batgirl as the hero, curious to see what the pirate princess has in store for Batgirl

RavenClaw

Wonderful story

RavenClaw

Wondaful story

RavenClaw

tmon wrote: ↑
1 year ago
The copy of Batgirl: Seeds by shovelry Is somewhat corrupt. It leaves off letters and words on the right side of the lines.

you have to scroll to the left to read it...

RavenClaw

great start, i am curious to see where this leads

RavenClaw

superheroinebabes wrote: ↑
1 year ago
Decision are difficult

obviously id choose batgirl

RavenClaw

ohhh, this addition has me curious

RavenClaw

Finally, hopefully they do it right

RavenClaw

superheroinelinks wrote: ↑
1 year ago
Life imitates art. What does Life imitates Art mean?
Expresses the notion that an event in the real world was inspired by a creative work.

do you know the source of the right picture?

RavenClaw

i am excited for what Dr. Kinsey has planned with the young villain in regards to Batgirl, i can't wait to see what you have in mind for Jonathan Crane, i don't feel like Wonder Woman would work personally, but other characters might like Jimmy Olsen, Cat woman could work considering they had a prev...

RavenClaw

Wonderful addition, can't wait to see where this leads

RavenClaw

this was a joy to read, excited to see whats in store

RavenClaw

things are defiantly getting interesting with Barbara,GA, and Batgirl,

RavenClaw

Ohhh Barbara is using the Exxxtasy, i am so glad we finally get to see that, grammar looks fine for now ill check back later and see if i find anything else

RavenClaw

Great addition love the detail on Supergirls experience

RavenClaw

ohhh this has me excited

RavenClaw

Great work, love the detail on the Linda/Supergirl, can't wait to see what you do with Batgirl

RavenClaw

a most wonderful addition as always

RavenClaw

Great addition as always, love how Barbara covered her mask with lead so Supergirl can't see through, can't wait to see where this goes.

RavenClaw

Great addition, the storytelling has me wanting more, Dr Kinsey is such a great manipulative character, can’t wait to see what’s in store perfect story, please ask for more frequent updates I would never ask a author for more frequent updates, SC has made one of the best Batgirl erotic fanfics I’ve...

RavenClaw

ohhh this is interesting

RavenClaw

Great addition, the storytelling has me wanting more, Dr Kinsey is such a great manipulative character, can’t wait to see what’s in store

RavenClaw

I am going to write my current thoughts if anything changes ill be sure to update 1. A. My favorite sequence is Batgirl (supergirl) and Dr Kinsey, just something about that dynamic that i love, its like she's a villain but hides it very well, B. The Superherione HQ Such a unique idea, going undercov...

RavenClaw

Reread this new addition at least 5 times, it was so well written, and the idea of one of Barbara’s dad’s coworkers knowing she’s batgirl and having that information over her gets me excited for their next encounter, I’m interested to see what’s next for Barbara

RavenClaw

Great addition, loved the swerve can’t see what’s in store for Babs

RavenClaw

[/quote] Excellent catch! I think I was writing "Catwoman" so often I mistakenly changed Batgirl's identity. But that made me think about incorporating a Batwoman character at some point... Thank you again for the heads up as I do want to make this story a quality endeavor. You are hereby ...

RavenClaw

Great addition, I notice at the part where you wrote “As Catwoman soaked herself in sexual bliss, “ you had bat woman instead of batgirl, I liked how you lead me to believe batgirl was getting the upper hand but at the end catwoman turned the tables, interested to see what happens next

RavenClaw

What I like about this story is that it feels like a mature version of something that might actually happen in a comic , being a superheroine can be stressful I can see why Barbara would need a therapist, this therapist just happens to have a Alternative motives ( who wouldn’t tbh it’s Barbara Gordo...

RavenClaw

nice little tease of things to come, the idea of Barbara being drugged on the job excites me

RavenClaw

Great additions, been loving the story interested to see where's it going, can't wait to see the Gold Avenger interact with Sal and Carmine Falcone, (maybe even some female criminal figures

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RavenClaw

wow, this addition was hot great work wasn't expecting that , i am interested to see who the woman in black is

RavenClaw

Ohhh wow, I like where this is going, i was thinking a identity for Batgirl at the stripclub could be Dominoed Daredol ( a reference to the 60's tv show)

RavenClaw

wow, interesting turn of events

RavenClaw

great addition, loved the confidence in Batgirl, was hoping there would be something involving Batgirl and the lady, but can't wait for more, defiantly one of my favorite stories i have read

RavenClaw

ohhh that was hot

RavenClaw

ohhhh this is gonna be interesting, i really enjoyed this addition leaves me wanting more, can't wait to see what happens in the hotel room

RavenClaw

great addition, loved how open Batgirl was to supergirl

RavenClaw

great addition can't wait for more

RavenClaw

wow this is a great story, can't wait to see what happens next

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