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Mlod

.... In the past I had began various threads of ideas. There was the Project D vault stuff - and the the fetishy multiverse set and I tested the waters with the Party Trap and Reactron The Slutmaster which were, well not my normal kind work. To be blunt none of it was well received and even my writ...

Mlod

I am very hopeful, I enjoyed the source material (starting with Wool I think) when I read it a decade or so ago.

Mlod

Great story, love those slow corruptions

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That's quite the turnaround, hehe

Mlod

I can see why you said it's 2/3's done, starting to run out of "down" for her to go (especially Cheeks and Alex).
This story should probably be moved to Heroine Dungeon?

Mlod

That does sound interesting, sounds like it'll differentiate from her cousin a lot more at least.

Mlod

That is quite the fall and effect from Rick, I don't know if he's an Incubus or somesuch that drains here when she's turned on, but either way with Lena on his side (at least unless she finds out he's the one who forced Kara into it) I don't doubt they'll manage to bring both Kara and Supergirl down...

Mlod

Good update, I wonder what the female officer whispered to Batgirl; her price for stopping the de-masking, or maybe she already figured out who was under the mask and plans future blackmail?

Mlod

Good section, seems Supergirl is careening down a similar path as Batgirl with a potential exxxtacy addiction on top to speed things along.
Sounds like Batgirl is about to live through some interesting times, looking forward to the continuation.

Mlod

Looked fun, so will check it out.

And I'm guessing if for the last 10 years everyone above the age of 18 has powers, making them more normal than having 2 legs and 2 hands, I don't see why people would wear costumes (outside of halloween and certain fun clubs).

Mlod

theheroineproject wrote: ↑
2 years ago
I started one here: https://www.theheroineproject.art/

Still working on cleaning up the data set, adding features and stories.

Oh that was nice, including stuff I hadn't seen before, thanks

Mlod

Kara Danvers was undercover, putting together an article about the network of wealthy criminal elements of National City. She had found a way in, posing as part of the catering staff and little by little had earned enough trust to finally be present at a high profile criminal event. Carrying a .......

Mlod

Batgirl is evil at this point and Peter is more so if he listens to Batgirl's nonsense. Supergirl will either kill him or do serious harm to him like castrate him. I can't see how Batgirl can be redeemed after this. But her descent will be very entertaining, yes? A redemption arc is not a requireme...

Mlod

So now both the Linda and the Supergirl parts of her have had a (very different) sexual experience. Batgirl and Peter went pretty far there at the end.

Mlod

1. What sequence(s) have you liked reading the most? --The ones were they are slowly "corrupted" (shown the benefits of a more carnal path), and the ones were the peril comes from being revealed and they have to go along mostly to keep up a pretense 2. Other than the superheroines, which c...

Mlod

Thanks to those who have left feedback. I have a few segments written that need to be revised and organized. But here are a few developing plot lines: 1. Batgirl and Catwoman clash at the Gotham Docks 2. Dr. Kinsey helps Supergirl with her romantic interest with a co-worker who is friends with Supe...

Mlod

Good chapter sugarcoater.
Looking forward to B's work at the gold room.
With what Dr. Kinsey did to set up and prepare Supergirl earlier, will she too be nudged towards a career change like this, or was she just a tool to get Batgirl to embrace her wickeder side?

Mlod

Great story! I hope you continue it soon. As for posting in the dungeon, that link is broken and havent been able to access it for a while. The link from inside "Supeheroine Stories" is indeed broken, but if you go directly to the dungeon from the forum entry overview you should be able t...

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Made and account just comment on this story. I love it so far and I can't wait to see were you take this branch of the story. Thanks, that means a lot to me to hear, as with a lot of others the last year or so has been... rather different, and I haven't really written anything anywhere (not anythin...

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that's going to be quite the interesting confrontation, not to mention the aftermath

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You've described Batgirls descent very well, looking forward to see where you and the good doctor plans to take her.

Mlod

Good story, she's been well played

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It sounds interesting, but I'll have to admit I'm not going to download any sort of executable from any forum

Mlod

Well made story and graphics, thanks for sharing.

Mlod

Interesting development, I guess she's more deeply affected than she would've hoped

Mlod

Interesting start, but there seems to be something wrong, at least I can only see the first handful of images, the rest just say "Image" without anything there

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She'll definitively not want that film to get out

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nicely written

Mlod

Part 8: "You bought just the one this time boss?" a large dark skinned man with clean shaven face and head asks. A smaller well dressed man pushing Kara's wheeled rack ahead of him nods "Yeah Sporus, none of the others were really all that interesting, besides, her price went a little...

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Part 6: Alone in the dark, a frantic Kara is trying to stop her panicking 'No.. no.. this is not /vrrosh :dokhahsh/, this is not the Phantom Zone, calm down Kara, there, you're turning, you're still in the car... naked and paralyzed, this is bad, Rao, I didn't even tell Alex where I was going. We've...

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Ah, easter cliff-hanger (I guess it is sort of traditional by now "Oh god, he died.... or did he, tune back in in 3 days for the next episode of Bible2 - Forgive harder!")

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Part's 1-5 (Part 1 is identical to my other story, except Kara decides to go undercover instead of as Supergirl, and everything after is completely different.) Part 1: "30 girls in the last two months Alex, that we know of!" Kara can't help but look at her sister again, hoping for a differ...

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Interesting chapter, I wonder what cultural misunderstandings are afoot (bonding as marriage, or more direct, I guess we'll see).

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Interesting story, seems like Kara has a thing for people in charge.

Mlod

Almost against one, almost against the other, and now... both? Looking a bit bleak

Mlod

Generally anything that can be voluntarily turned off/weakened, for example to go undercover or otherwise pass, balancing not being found out with succumbing to whatever peril it is (or being found out and having to try and be able to reverse it as they are in a trouble of their own making)

Mlod

Great start as always, that goes downhill fast for Kara and sounds like it's just the beginning

Mlod

I do agree (hence the comment about being less satisfied). It's the unfortunate truism that you get what you measure/give feedback on, and I wrote this at a place that definitively gave more positive feedback when there was sex (considering I'd never written a word of sex scenes before I'll consider...

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Chapter 10-13 (a bit less satisfied with some of these than some of the earlier ones) --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 'No, this is bad enough as it is, I'm not touching that bracelet' heading over to her desk Kara picks up her phone...

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Sometimes I've not read rewrites, and sometimes I've happily read them, but either way I third what the ones above said, would seem preferable to keep (and link to and from) the original

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He seems to have a healthy amount of respect, so less likely to make mistakes out of hubris

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Chapter 7-9 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Getting ready the next morning Kara is standing in front of the mirror and staring intently at herself 'Could Leslie have dosed me with something, that wasn't like me at all! Well, sometim...

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Thanks, I've long been thinking about trying my hand at writing, and found this to be low stakes entry that would still mean I'd try lots of things (with the branching format) and also be a bit challenging (as someone who's never written a sex scene in their life, it's a lot harder than it looked fr...

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I agree on it being the most accessible, but I'd never consider it as some stepping stone to something "better", nor would I consider others inferior.
They are all just different and can all bring joy to people (now let's all hold hands and sing kumbaya!)

Mlod

Interesting story, many different aspects (Mr. Northram, the competition etc) sending her from the pits of despair to mastery of her surroundings.

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Chapter 1-6 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "30 girls in the last two months Alex, that we know of!" Kara can't help but look at her sister again, hoping for a different answer. Turning away and shaking her head, Alex move...

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It depends a bit, but in general I do prefer stories where things are established and built up to, not just a hard "wham bam thank you m'am" sort of deal. Having said that, as mentioned by others, fanfic does tend to let you build a bit of a connection and pull you in faster due to people ...

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I found this place due to a mention from some other site (in regard to the arkham asylum comics with harley in charge), and I stayed for the stories, they are why I keep checking here and leaving comments etc is why I registered.

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Doesn't sound like she'll be able to resist for long, good writing as always

Mlod

From the name I didn't necessary think it'd be more hardcore/explicit, but I assumed what would be here would be more in the way of power dynamics (voluntary or involuntary) and things in general more outside what the supreme court might consider "the norm" (got to love vague laws...)

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