like the story so far, it is written quite well and advances quickly with the plot but detailing everything necessary to understand it, I am anxious for its continuation.

The story looks interesting, it is a bit confusing at first but I really want to see what follows, according to the name and the image the story will trigger in a criminal trial, something that has always seemed like a promising idea.

oh wow, it's a very good story, I look forward to the continuation, thanks for sharing it

Wow, I'm really surprised I liked this story, thanks for sharing it

I really liked this part, I must confess that I do not remember what the previous version was like and now that you changed it I did not want to revise it, but it really kept me entertained and now I wait impatiently for the continuation, thanks for continuing the story.

I loved the story, incredible to be your first story

it's an incredible story, thanks for sharing

Hello, I think it's very interesting everything you said, the disguise, although not conventional, is quite sexy, I only wonder if they wear masks, I assume it's not because you did not mention them, but I ask only for doubts.

I liked the story and I want the continuation.

honestly I do not finish to understand how it was that Valora defeated Sinistrus, anyway I think it's a bright and entertaining story, congratulations.

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5 years ago

Wow! Great Story, Congrats

thanks, I had the doubt with publishing the continuations I did, mainly because I was not sure that it was understood correctly, by the translation,

I am at the same time confused and wanting to know what is next, very good story,

entertaining story, very well done.

Hello, I'm Manuelmen, I've been following this site for years, enjoying the great stories published here, today I finally gathered the courage to publish a story here, I know it must be full of errors, it was originally written and published in other pages in Spanish, my native language, and this is...

finally I decided to publish something, I'll do it in a little while before I regret it, hahaha, thanks for the advice.

Hello Manuelmen. As I asked of the original poster have you thought of writing in your native language (Spanish in your case) and using Google translate to convert it into English? It may not be perfect but it should be good enough for readers to follow. Como te pregunté del cartel original ¿has pe...

I feel a bit identified by this topic, I have followed this page for years, and I have always wanted to publish a story here, I have even published a page of stories in Spanish, unfortunately my English has always been bad and I have not dared to publish anything