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I don't think I ever commented on this story. I just wanted to share my appreciation for this absolute gem. I read and enjoyed it immensely awhile back. Extremely hot scenes. Loved the training, verbal commands, and think you did a great job writing Sue's drugged perspective. No pressure to write mo...

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This is the last chapter for awhile. I gotta write the rest. The story will be moving in a mostly sexual direction moving forward. Again, feel free to comment positive or negative. I hope you enjoyed what's happened so far. 17 Calvin woke and he found himself on his back underneath a brown industria...

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I wanted to read one of your stories and post a few thoughts. I really liked some parts. I watched Xena ages ago but I'm really rusty on the lore and world so I'm not that familiar with these characters. I also have a tiny bit feedback for improvement, I hope that's okay, but feel free to let me kno...

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Beguile 16 cover.png 16 Slasher hooted with glee as the final stage of his plan culminated in the delivery of sweet, unconscious Beguile into his waiting arms. The mercenaries he’d hired were professionals and they’d been paid handsomely enough to ensure their silence. Besides them, no one knew Sla...

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lmao that is very funny. I had no idea the name could be interpreted that way when I picked it but I think it's a happy little coincidence. Thanks for sharing that tidbit. :]

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Thanks. Stable diffusion did the art I just guided it in the right direction.

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Thanks for commenting Vega. Feels good to know I'm not just shouting into the void. I do have some f/f stuff planned later so you'll have something to look forward to even if it's not strictly f/f. The majority will be m/f and m+/f but yeah I have some stuff in mind. I have really changed my view on...

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All right, I've posted almost everything I've wrote so far. There's two more chapters and I will post them because why not? they're already finished. I know it's really slow. Maybe too slow for most people. Is anyone enjoying this? I won't be offended if not as I don't take it personally. I wrote th...

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14 Beguile paced back and forth in her living room while Cal watched her from his seat on the couch. Her mind ran wild with fear and guilt. She had essentially raped an entire audience of adoring fans by letting her powers control her instead of controlling them. “I don’t get what happened,” she sai...

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13 Beguile had a long hot shower after her morning swim and tried to stay focused on the day ahead of her. However, yesterday kept creeping up and breathing on the back of her neck. Those men had molested her body, she’d felt like nothing more than a toy, and she hated it. There was no recourse to r...

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Beguile 12 cover.png 12 Slasher sat in the back of the van provided by the Union donors on the street outside of Beguile’s mansion. The donors enthusiasm for his plan only increased after they met Beguile in person. They gave him more resources to carry out her destruction on the condition that he ...

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11 On Horace’s request, Beguile rode the elevator at the Heroes Union HQ down to the basement and the diagnostics division. Horace met her and Cal at the entrance and led them deeper into a labyrinth of white walls, offices, strange machines, and devices the like of which she’d never seen before. “B...

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10 Slasher had watched with disbelief, just like the rest of the world, as Beguile pacified and hugged the otherling. Without a doubt, the otherling she faced was weaker than Prince Xyzanara but she still wrapped the monster around her little finger. His theories and accusations had gone up in flame...

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9 Slasher woke up without a headache, which made no sense because he drank a fifth, and the events of the previous night came back to him piece by piece. That little bitch mindfucked him! She made him do the worst fucking things. He had a goddamn, wetcock bubble bath, which he hated. The only baths ...

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Beguile 8 cover.png 8 Horace Range, head of operations for the Heroes Union, requested Beguile and Throng meet him at HQ for a meeting about something important. That’s how Beguile found herself in his office on the top floor of the impressive Heroes Union HQ building downtown. Instead of sitting a...

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7 Vera’s team had orchestrated a meeting for her with one of the movie industry’s premiere producers, a Mr. Patrick Cowly. He headed up one of the largest studios in town and wanted to discuss a Beguile movie. A great opportunity to spread love to even more people. She had wanted to wear her street ...

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6 Slasher rested in the exclusive lounge for pillar rank heroes at the Hero Union HQ while Dr. Malwin did some final adjustments on his new right arm. The tall and handsome doctor spoke with a drawl that made him sound like a country bumpkin but it would be foolish to misjudge the savvy inventor for...

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Beguile 5 cover.png 5 Vera Zorina had finished her daily self-care routine involving a healthy breakfast, yoga, and a lengthy swim, and now she was in the back of a limo on her way to meet with students at one of Image City’s poorer neighborhood schools. She wore her iconic costume which marked her...

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Overkill 4 cover.png 4 Horace wasted no time before hitting the emergency button in the command center and activating Overkill. He fed the otherling’s location and data to Overkill’s quantum processor. He’d been watching the pillar ranks on the many screens in the control center. Panic squeezed his...

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3 There was a glint in the sky and Slasher activated his power; hunt. He fixed the rapidly descending blur as his target. Hunting a target granted Slasher several advantages in a fight. He’d take less damage from his prey and deliver more. He’d be able to track it through walls and read its mind. Sl...

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slasher 2 cover.png 2 A Union-assigned passenger drone delivered Slasher to the coordinates sent by that milquetoast waste of space Horace and set down on the concrete. The automatic door hissed as it slid open and Slasher stepped out onto the street. Image City had been mostly evacuated. Some of t...

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Beguile 1 cover.png An introduction I just wanted to put some disclaimers because there's some things you need to know about this story before you start reading. First, this story is extremely long. I haven't finished it yet, usually I would before posting, but it's already 30,000 words and no wher...

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This is really hot. The way you've written supergirl basically driven to the brink by horniness is really well done. Nice work. I like the idea of the curse quite a bit.

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Thanks again for sharing your thoughts everyone. It's really interesting and seems like a fifty fifty split based on this relatively small sample size. It's very instructional and I'm glad I asked. I think ultimately I'm going to go maskless for this heroine just based on the context of the story I ...

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Very good points. I'll keep that in mind. It's always hard to tell what others preferences are. Thanks for weighing in.

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Hi, I've been outlining an original peril story after I had what I consider a good idea and I'm probably going to write it. I'm creating a unique super heroine and I've been using stable diffusion for character design. However, the character design doesn't include a mask. I was wondering what the ge...

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30 Galaxy Z: six months later. Kara stepped out of a bath, feeling relaxed and calm after an invigorating afternoon. First, she’d taken part in an orgy with Adam and his subjects. Empress Kara was still the talk of the galaxy. Many people were awe-struck at her superhuman sexuality, which was matche...

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29 Supergirl had won, but now she was the most hated person in the world. News programs declared her a freak, a whore, a super slut, and everyone ignored the fact that she was the victorious champion. Adam the Tyrant, previously unbeaten in the arena, conqueror of a thousand worlds, had submitted to...

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28 The day of the arena had arrived, and for once in her life, Supergirl was nervous. Her hands were shaking and her lips kept trembling. There were butterflies flurrying in the pit of her stomach, tickling her insides. A helicopter had delivered her to the arena in the sky where servants of the Pan...

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27 “We’ve got a serious situation,” Hank said. Martian Manhunter was waiting for Kara at the DEO offices. Alex left when Kara walked in, avoiding eye contact. Obviously, Alex didn’t want to face what happened at Catco. “It must be if you called me,” Kara said. “I thought I wasn’t needed here anymore...

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26 Rick walked out of his office at six o’clock, flanked by Lena, and they exchanged a satisfied glance. Kara’s first day had been everything they planned and more. The office, reluctant and unsure at first, had been riled up watching Rick use her. Their protests grew quiet and they joined in Kara’s...

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25 Supergirl went to the DEO that night, answering a summons from Hank, and striding into the central operations feeling confused. Her experiences at the hands of Lena and Rick had been thrilling, but they hadn’t let her cum. And she could only guess what tomorrow would bring. There was no defending...

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24 Rick answered the knock at his door in his bathrobe. He had been enjoying a glass of Pomerol and thinking of his plans for Supergirl, Champion of Earth. But first, he had something in mind for Kara Danvers. The path of Supergirl’s desecration passed through the domination of Kara Danvers. He open...

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23 Kara woke up feeling like shit, and the first thing she registered was the fleshy member in her mouth. She opened her eyes and saw Cheeks was asleep in her bed. She was sleeping sideways on it, her head in his lap, his flaccid penis resting on her tongue. She tried to push him out of her mouth wi...

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22 -- !Hardcore Content Warning! Kara had barely gotten through the door when Brady spread her legs and pushed himself between them. She let out a moan as he lowered her onto the floor, ripping her tube top in an effort to release her breasts. His package was decently sized, not as large as Rick’s, ...

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21 Kara walked down the main street of National City’s entertainment district, neon signs blinking in the dark night. At ten o’clock on weekends, the police closed the street to car traffic. Drunk and celebratory people flooded the street. Bass music pounded in the background and laughter filtered t...

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Thanks for reading and commenting Mlod. :>

This is the 2/3 point in the story. There's ten more chapters. Things get pretty bad for Kara before they get better.

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20 The DEO called in Supergirl to deal with an emergency situation. “There’s a huge power surge above National City,” Winn said. Supergirl walked over to the viewing screen and saw the source. An enormous structure flickered in and out of existence in the clouds above National City. Almost like it w...

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19 Supergirl walked into the DEO that night feeling anything but super. She’d considered not going ten times, vacillating between fear and reassurance, convincing herself it would be all right. When she finally walked into the operations center, the truth became clear. Winn turned away, focusing on ...

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18 Kara rushed into the bar, five minutes late after all her trouble, and James’ jaw dropped when he saw her. She’d put on a red, backless silk dress that was very short and lipstick red stilettos. The Kryptonite necklace hung between her breasts, which were supported by a push-up bra that peeked ou...

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17 Kara arrived at Catco in high spirits, excited by the idea that she could beat Rick in a fight. Everything would be so much simpler if she could figure everything out on her own. Rick confused her and muddled her thoughts. An email from Rick arrived almost as soon as she sat at her desk. “Kara, Y...

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16 Supergirl soared over National City, the wind drying her hair, until she reached the edge where concrete turned to nature. The forested regions around Rick’s estate were bare of many other houses or apartments, which made finding his mansion a breeze. Flying over the gate, she landed on the Itali...

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15 At four fifty in the afternoon, ten minutes before end of day, Kara got another email from Rick. “Meet me after work. The alley around the side of the building.” There was no excuse to get out of this one. Alex was coming over that night to talk, but not until seven. Kara responded with: “Ok.” Af...

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Thank you Dr. Dominator (the legend) and tmon. This is about the halfway point in the story. Things get worse for Kara before they get better. 14 Kara’s apartment felt like an exotic land, mystifying and foreign to her. There was a teddy bear on her bed. A little soft, brown plush toy. She felt sick...

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Thank you flagon :D 13 Rick took her to the Superbowl in a limo. He’d dressed her in booty shorts and a short shirt that revealed her midriff. The collar stayed around her neck, of course, but he left the leash back at the hotel room. She’d sucked their dicks for breakfast that morning. Kara wonder...

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12 Kara paced the hotel bedroom, her shame giving way to anger. Before they landed, Rick injected her with something and she’d blacked out. She’d tried to talk to him but he’d given her the silent treatment. The two men acted like she didn’t exist. Now they’d chained her up in the hotel bedroom, a ...

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Just want to say, I'm really enjoying this story and I look forward to seeing where it goes. I also understand the inner conflict that comes from playing with these kinds of fantasies, but I think it might be healthy to explore them in fiction. So long as we understand the hard line that exists bet...

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Another graphic chapter. Be warned. 11 George held little Kara in his strong arms, honed from years of manual labour, and Rick opened up a bottle of vodka. He chuckled as he came over to Kara. She looked up at him with the strangest expression; a mix of fear and arousal. She stopped fighting George ...

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Warning: This chapter and the next are extremely graphic. Skip if you're faint of heart. 10 “I’m going to write the players on this piece of paper,” Rick said. He held up a blank sheet to Kara. “This is paper Kara, it’s what real writers work on.” “I know,” Kara said. “Do you? I can never be sure ...

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I agree with many of your points, and sure, there’s lots of new words and perverted words based on political agendas today. But a lot of the redefining happens innocuously. Look at “literally.” It means figuratively now. There’s no politics there, just crazy humanity. The other thing is that many of...

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