Thanks Void, really appreciate you taking the time to comment! I was trying to make this one more dire than Margo's usual adventures, and the villain she was up against a little more serious than her usual foe. I also appreciate your suggestions about where else I could take things, with Margo's mis...

((Coming back to finally conclude this story. It was a weird one, and I'd like to thank anyone that took/takes the time to read it through. As always, any advice or pointers for revision would be welcome, as well as any questions/comments concerns. Thanks for reading!)) SLAVES OF THE SULTAN, Part Tw...

For me, it's always a snug domino mask. I love how easy it is to pull off, while still covering a good portion of the face. It makes the unmasking moment feel tenuous, while still allowing for free-flowing hair and a dramatic tone when some dastardly villain finally does pull it off! Artistically, I...

Hey folks, and happy holidays! Have the latest installment of the Gossamer Ghost's adventures, here! Might be a little different than usual, hope folks enjoy it! As always, any questions/comments/criticisms are truly appreciated! Hope you enjoy! SLAVES OF THE SULTAN A Gossamer Ghost Peril The idle c...

This is a really cute project, and I've been a fan of Audrey's since her early appearances in the /co/creation threads! Hope the Patreon goes well, Saburo is doing a great job with the art!

QUEEN'S GAMBIT, part two: A Gossamer Ghost Peril by Betty Dreadful [[First of all, thank you so much Void for your recent comments. Really helps to have someone reading along, and I appreciate all of your input on my work thus far! Very cool of you! And a big thanks to everyone that's been reading ...

The Queen's Gambit A Gossamer Ghost Peril The hunt had been a long one, as the Gossamer Ghost tracked down the new substance that was flooding the streets of her city. The new drug was showing up in the dorms first, which naturally made it the full focus of her job at CitiChannel News. Margo Fox, i...

My, oh my, what a yarn! My only complaint is that it might have been more apropos to post it 'round Halloween! (Extra points on the villain's handle. It might be the most high-class joke I've ever seen in our fine genre...) Hey, thank you for the feedback! Could have been fun as a Halloween tale, y...

Hey, folks! Here with my latest story of Margo Fox, the Gossamer Ghost! Hope folks enjoy this one- as always, any and all comments, criticism & concerns are welcome! DINNER PARTY OF THE LITTLE DEATH: A Gossamer Ghost Peril By Betty Dreadful It was late in the evening, usually around the time tha...

Hey Betty, 'douchebros' was so awesome, I had to use it. Hope you don't mind. Haha, of course not! And again, great story! Really enjoying Nightingale as a confident, cool & ass-kicking heroine! Seconding DrDominator's comments on the dynamic between Nightingale and Chandler being super compell...

Sorry I'm just seeing this now, but thanks so much for the reply, Abductor! Really appreciate you reading, glad you enjoyed!

This was a really fun read! Thought it was cool that your heroine was introduced with such an air of mystery, she comes across like a real bad ass. The douchebro dialogue of the crooks was fun- focusing on them was a fun direction for this story, and lends to the mysterious quality of the vigilante ...

Thanks everyone for your feedback and replies! Really appreciate folks taking the time to read and comment, and I've tried to incorporate as much of folks' commentary as I could into the revisions (and into following stories). Tried to revise the crime in the plot, to hopefully make it more believab...

SILENT SCREAMS OF THE zombie, pt. 2 [Hey, folks! Thanks Abductor, for your interest! And thanks to everyone who's given this story a read-through! Hope that the ending is satisfying, and as always feel free to leave any feedback, criticisms or questions! And now, the (hopefully) thrilling conclusion...

Really enjoyed this story, and really enjoying back and reading the Fuchsia Fox stories before this! There's a pretty great world you've built around the Fox, making her feel like a well developed heroine. It also makes going back through the older stories really enjoyable! As for this installment, ...

[Hey folks! Taking my second stab at the superheroine peril story, again featuring my heroine the Gossamer Ghost! Thanks to everyone who read the last installment, and especially to those who left feedback. Haven't gone back and done a total revision of that story yet, but I tried to incorporate tha...

Really enjoyable read! Thought the main character was very understandable, & the sense of high drama and climactic confrontation came across well, even without the full build up to how Evelyn got here, and the full context of what was going on. Really liked Evelyn, especially her relationship wi...

Thanks for the welcome, folks! Already really liking what I'm seeing and reading here! Love your Avatar Betty, may i ask where it's from? I'm afraid I don't know the original artist, but the full-size and colored image can be seen here: https://luscious.net/c/superheroes/pictures/tagged/+drugged/id/...

[So, this is my first stab at a heroine peril story, featuring my character the Gossamer Ghost. Comments/criticisms are very much appreciated, hope somebody finds it to their liking! Thanks in advance for reading!] In the Grip of the Hangman A Story of the Gossamer Ghost The night was cold on Margo ...

Hullo, all! I'm Betty Dreadful and I'm new here to the forums. I'm hoping to share some heroine peril writing I've been working on, and maybe get some feedback on it. Hope it's to folks' liking! Additionally, I might be looking forward to some roleplay, if there's anyone that's interested- feel free...