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bobcashman

Nice story so far. Interesting!

bobcashman

Great story. Great ending. Enjoyed it very much. Different than the usual she wins in the end stuff. Thanks!

bobcashman

Love the story so far. But plllleassee. All these stories have the same, she escaped at the last moment, etc. How about an end where she doesn't? Where she breaks down and begs to survive. The deal...her secret ID for her life.

bobcashman

Wonder Woman saving the day? That would be a typical ending. There is soooo much here that can be done. How about a tragic ending with Batgirl, etc. Now that would be interesting!!

bobcashman

Interest has not waned at all. Just waiting every day for an update. Let's see how she does with that EXXXtacy.

bobcashman

Really great story. Great ending! Thank you! Keep writing.

bobcashman

Great premise and great story. Can't wait to see Texan Wonder completely defeated.

bobcashman

Love where this story is going. Let's see the heroine broken, shall we?

bobcashman

Agreed, it's a great story. But, like many, unfortunately, it seems the longer the story gets with numerous storylines, the longer between updates until they just stop at some point. We may be there.

bobcashman

How did the good doctor know Linda's name?

bobcashman

Well that was an unexpected twist, though I love the fact the drugs were placed in her pouch. Should add some drama and fun. Hopefully, we don't have to wait another week or two for the next installment!!

bobcashman

Thanks for the story. Really liked the give and take of the fight. Thought it was very, very interesting. Thanks again for what is a great story.

bobcashman

Thanks for the story. Really liked the give and take of the fight. Thought it was very, very interesting. Thanks again for what is a great story.

bobcashman

Time for some fun with Exxxtasy. Lots of it. Who wouldn't want to get a superheroine addicted to it and then unmasked. Talk about the ultimate power over Batgirl.

bobcashman

Love the way this story is going. Mob bosses, a new highly addictive drug...Babs slowly sliding down. So many possibilities...

bobcashman

One can only imagine what lies ahead for BG. Great story.

bobcashman

Hmmm...I liked that officer's name, LOL. Great story and I have no idea where this will end or how.

bobcashman

Nice start but lose the colored fonts. In order to read them we have to practically highlight them.

bobcashman

Hmmmm...unfortunate events? Love where this is leading. Just hoping it leads to a disastrous downfall for both.

bobcashman

Who cares about any grammar errors, LOL. Great story. Just keeps getting better. Lovin' the descent.

bobcashman

Thank you, sir!!!

bobcashman

Anyone point me to a link to the comic, (may be Circus of Terror, Ringmaster or a pirate story) where Green Specter is walking the plank, gets shot and falls onto a car far below?

bobcashman

Lovin' it so far but please keep the focus on Batgirl...don't go to far into the weeds.

bobcashman

Great story with plenty of drama and sex. Who knows where this goes but I know I can't wait for the next chapter!

bobcashman

Hey, great story and thanks so much for writing it. Was interesting and erotic. A great read. Only thing I would have changed is knowing for sure what happend to Moon girl and then having Sunwoman find out and feel guilt over it.

bobcashman

As always, keep going...interesting!

bobcashman

I wonder if this story will ever be continued or it's doomed to be one of those stories with no ending.

bobcashman

Another super story, smerdyakov667!!! I thoroughly enjoyed the bad ending. I admit an epilogue would have been nice about how Erin, aka Blue Lynx's body had been found, strangely shrunken and devoid of fluids or something like that along with the bodies of the other girls and Margot. As usual, can't...

bobcashman

Great story. Can't wait to see where this devious thing goes, and only hope it's going to end poorly for Batgirl.

bobcashman

LOve this story so far. However, would love to see a bit of trepidation on BG's part that she knows what she did was wrong and feel some serious reluctance (but still unable to resist Penguin) that she has betrayed her pals. Great story!

bobcashman

I sure would love to see this story continue. Great start.

bobcashman

Wow. This story is the gift that keeps on giving!

bobcashman

Hope you keep writing this story. Love where this is all going. Sooner or later BG should have to pay the piper though and I hope you write an ending like that.

bobcashman

Am loving this story! Great stuff. Can't wait to see how she betrays Batman. I also like how you have her still conscious of what she is doing and grappling with that, but also unable to resist Penguin. It would be fun to see her impregnated by Penguin with the corresponding horror of what she has d...

bobcashman

Again, really enjoyed this story. I like the dark endings so I hope in the future there are more of them. I don't like to see the superheroine win all the time. A good dark ending is great!

bobcashman

Wow...just found this. Thank you! Amazing talent on display here. Great story. Would love to see one where Batgirl loses, perhaps after a battle like this her costume is ripped, she is beaten, unmasked and then back broken.

bobcashman

Left an email for you. Hope you got it.

bobcashman

I agree these stories are pure fantasies. However, fantasy worlds need to set their own rules. A dead character who returns without an explanation is poor writing. Special events and powers need explanations without contradictions to previous rules. Dragon Ball Z does it better than everyone, but s...

bobcashman

Interesting discussion. Personally, I love to see the heroine defeated, sometimes killed. For those who say it leaves no where to go I say this: This is all make believe. I can kill my heroine in one story. The next one she's back in another story and so on. This is make believe, for crying out loud...

bobcashman

Loved it, loved it, loved it. Keep writing!

bobcashman

Great, great stuff. KEEP GOING!!!

bobcashman

Thanks for the stories. I'm enjoying them. For gosh sakes...unmask the woman. You think a criminal wouldn't want that to hang over her head??

bobcashman

Nice, but the Riddler has some very evil, I hope, things in store for Batgirl to finish her off once and for all time.

bobcashman

Will do. There are all sorts of possibilities for an unmasked heroine. Hopefully...none of them good.

bobcashman

I'm sorry i can't be of any help but Im replying in hopes of coming back to check when someone has gotten an answer for you because this sounds really good. I hope someone can help. In the event you (or anyone else here) still cares, I finally found it . It was apparently done by our very own @bobc...

bobcashman

Nice story! Thanks. Now they have her unmasked on tape, you would think the video would be all over the net and she would discover her little secret life as Black Curve is out - with the bad guys gunning for her. Can't wait to see what happens next!

bobcashman

I enjoyed the story. Thought it was very, very creative. I am a more traditionalist, however. Would just love to see a story where you provide the alternate ending, and some really bad (good endings) for BL.

bobcashman

The link on your blog isn't working!

bobcashman

Love the ending...but I think you will quickly get burned out trying out 50 endings. Just saying...

bobcashman

Thanks tmon and tallyho. You are right TO...proofing was never a great thing with me. I wrote em and that was it. Well, actually, I was writing mostly for myself, LOL, thus the rather shabby job of proofing. I'll post more soon. They're all from 95-2000 or so. Don't have the time or passion to write...

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