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Isn't Dierdra Hall, the original Electrawoman, on General Hospital?

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Fuchsia Fox: "Cats and Dogs" Chapter 1 -- Washington, D.C. The Watergate Hotel glittered. Sons and daughters of old money families had been arriving since eight, along with a few younger members of Congress, media celebrities, even one or two movie stars. In the midst of the Cadillacs, Mer...

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I totally had help once again from The Centurion and a huge shout out and to be honest MOST of the credit goes to him for this one... Credit where it's due, my original draft was 6800 words (about 16 pages), typical length for one of my stories. Lady Jane's final draft runs to 9400 words (about 23 ...

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I'm glad you liked it. As far as the last couple of stories go, a certain person has been encouraging me to move a little out of my "comfort zone", but I'm afraid I'm not straying very far. I've been trying to think of something dangerous for Halloween, but coming up a little short so far....

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I appreciate the feedback, both of you! I forgot that I was going to be on vacation last week, and that's why I didn't post the final chapter then... *** Chapter 7 -- Fletcher sagged as if all the air had gone out of him. "Jen... You don't understand! I came back for you! I came all the way fro...

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I'm so happy you're still following along! Chapter 6 -- Suddenly a stout, bald man with a Russian accent accosted Fletcher suspiciously. "Who are you talking to, buckaroo?" "What?" Fletcher said, pretending he couldn't hear over the music. "Talking to who?" "That's...

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Chapter 5 -- Saturday night at The L Zone, the weekday crowd had swollen to nearly forty as word got around that a new act was making its debut -- "Wonder Kyla and Foxtacular Girl". The regular girls kept the men entertained through the early evening, but by ten o'clock even these jaded pa...

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Chapter 4 -- The Fuchsia Fox cowered on the floor in a semi-prone position, her arms holding her torso partially upright while her legs curled beneath her. Nude, stripped of both her costume and her powers, she felt completely helpless in the hands of her enemies. "H-how?" she stammered. M...

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Never fear, my good friend. You are about to find out! Chapter 3 -- The Fuchsia Fox climbed onto the stage, strolling over to the chrome pole and caressing it. Was this the kind of thing Martin wanted? It looked so easy, so simple. Slowly she let her body slide downward along the shaft, letting the ...

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Yep, somebody is messing with her mind big time! Chapter 2 -- A few minutes later, the Fuchsia Fox was miles away, in northwest Washington. Along the way she had found the privacy to change from her daring fuchsia costume into denim shorts and a loose tie-dyed top, completing the transformation from...

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[Thiis story follows on the heels of "The Price of Doom". While not nearly as graphic, it does have a little more sexual content than your typical Fuchsia Fox story.] Chapter 1 -- Fairfax County, Virginia "Unit 12 to Dispatch! In pursuit of four suspects driving a green Ford SUV headi...

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Nice to see American Star again, but since when does she not need her bracelets? Did I miss a story somewhere?

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Yeah, I thought there was a short run. I have one with some peril on the cover, at least, I think. I have vague memories of having had another issue that I found more interesting, when I was younger. You must be thinking of the one where the "lake monster" is clutching her in its slimy te...

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The original comic only ran about 8 issues. I remember Andrea Thomas in bondage once, but I don't recall Isis being defeated, although Scarab certainly gave her a run for her money.

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I agree with The Scribbler. I never watched the Batman series growing up, so Yvonne Craig (with all due respect) never raised so much as a blip on my sexual awareness. Joanne Cameron was a much bigger influence, but Isis was never defeated or captured on her show, so she mainly just got me to imagin...

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As far as visual appeal of the costume goes, I don't think you can beat Wonder Woman or Supergirl. Bright colors, bare legs, and bare shoulders! Mmmmm! As far as characters themselves, my favorite heroines were probably Wonder Woman, the Wasp (the way she had a new costume every few months) and the ...

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I can't imagine how the Voynich manuscript is going to figure in this, but I can't wait to find out!

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valugi wrote:I look forward to reading more of this story and find out what is jennifer

Let me see... short brunette hair, brown eyes, gold bracelets, has a boyfriend in the army... who could it be? ; )

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Nice start! Good work the both of you, I look forward to more. (My only minor point would be the 'fucked' reference seemed a little out of character for a Heroine talking to a complete stranger at a swanky shin dig :D ) I picture Jordin as a bit impulsive. With the device preying on her mind, she j...

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There you go, you're getting the idea! You want to use block paragraphing, though, because this forum doesn't read formatting and indentations. Check out some other stories to see how we do it. Don't think you have to come up with complicated plots. Starting out you want to keep it simple, just like...

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This is a pretty cool story. It looks like you based it on the pictures. Nice. To make your next story better? The first thing you can do is break it into paragraphs. It makes it much easier to read. The second thing is describe the heroine. I know you also posted pictures, which is really nice, but...

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Wonderful ending! This is the Victory I like to see, powerful and brimming with confidence (and at the same time remembering how she had been used and humiliated)! Your stories are always like a roller coaster ride!

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Ohhhh! Connor captures Victory and treats her like his own personal playtoy? Okay, I can respect that. But turning her into a BLOND? That's going too far, the Fiend!

And oh what's this new plot twist? Is somebody ELSE about to get his hands on her?

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Are my ears burning?

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Very kind of you to say so. Thank you so much!

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Woo-hoo! I'm loving this!

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I'm not sure about this coming in as a rule as there are what 400 stories here and not everyone has read them all. I think someone posting a comment helps draw attention to a story that might be overlooked - I hadn't read the recently commented on TOSG story that was from 2009, but it got a reply, ...

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I'm not sure about this coming in as a rule as there are what 400 stories here and not everyone has read them all. I think someone posting a comment helps draw attention to a story that might be overlooked - I hadn't read the recently commented on TOSG story that was from 2009, but it got a reply, ...

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Here's another thing I want to bring up. The other day someone bumped an old story from 2010! Now, I definitely do NOT want to discourage you from leaving public comments! Writers need feedback like we need air to breathe! But this only confuses things. We all read this story three years ago and sud...

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Here's another thing I want to bring up. The other day someone bumped an old story from 2010! Now, I definitely do NOT want to discourage you from leaving public comments! Writers need feedback like we need air to breathe! But this only confuses things. We all read this story three years ago and sud...

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Chapter 7 -- Steven lumbered through the outside doors of the museum. Ten feet tall, even he was a little bit awed by the sight of the crowd which had gathered outside, television crews and spotlights, all held back by a thin cordon of police cars and uniforms. A shiver of panic rippled through the ...

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Great, lots of action! "Mind control... not good!" She took the words right out of my mouth! Looking forward to seeing more!

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I appreciate it, dear lady. I'll probably post the conclusion on Friday.

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It looks like cthulu went back and deleted the character handbook! What do say we start compiling another one? Creators could do profiles of their own characters and readers could contribute profiles of their favorite characters. The only drawback is they wouldn't be in alphabetical order. What do y...

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It looks like cthulu went back and deleted the character handbook! What do say we start compiling another one? Creators could do profiles of their own characters and readers could contribute profiles of their favorite characters. The only drawback is they wouldn't be in alphabetical order. What do y...

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Chapter 6 -- As the alien made of rock swept down upon them, MacClary fell back, afraid to open fire for fear of a stray bullet hitting the Fuchsia Fox. The men with the non-lethal ion rifles had no such qualms. The energy beams zinged off his stone carapace and only seemed to make him angrier as he...

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Little miss-post here. Nothing to be alarmed about.

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Ditto! I hope you didn't "climax" too early!

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Chapter 5 -- "In the Mood" had given way to "Moonlight Serenade", sweet and romantic. As the other couples danced, the Fuchsia Fox and her captor were in a world of their own. "Well," Steven said, "we were getting ready for the big push on the Phillipines. I was fl...

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Interesting beginning. If I have to be honest (and I do) I thought she was captured a little too quickly. I like to see her kick a little booty first. But I'm eager to see what happens next!

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Chapter 4 -- The Fuchsia Fox went rigid with shock! Heat was rising in her cheeks as she thought of herself strutting around, oh so cocky and self-assured and thinking she had things under control, only to be unceremoniously STRIPPED of all her powers! But before she could make another move, her cap...

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Chapter 3 -- "Omigosh!" the Fuchsia Fox gasped, dropping to her knee beside the nearest one. Fortunately his body armor seemed to have protected him from serious injury. As she tugged off his helmet and cradled his head, he was already coming around. "Oh I'm so sorry, sir! I don't kno...

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RedMountain wrote:Enjoying this one so far! Very intersting villain we have here!

Yes, I was trying to create an unusual villain for a change. Now I only hope I don't botch up the idea too badly.

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Chapter 2 -- Meanwhile, the stone man continued across 14th Street, where the other two police officers had broken out riot guns and were using their patrol car as a barricade. They opened fire, but shotgun shells proved no more effective than 9mm bullets had. The stone man merely slammed his fist d...

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Fuchsia Fox: "Romancing the Stone" [It hardly seems like three years since I created the Fuchsia Fox! Comic book violence, moderate sexual content.] Chapter 1 -- Washington D.C. On a surprisingly mild night in January, a young couple walked hand in hand along the edge of Potomac Park. Jenn...

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I'm sorry. I don't why I got that impression. Maybe because she refered to herself as his "Master". Plus Russian names have gender. A woman would be "Melnikova". Once again, sorry about the misunderstanding.

Reading the replacement chapter... okay this is a lot better.

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Thanks a lot, guys! I really appreciate it! This one was a bit unusual for me, and I wasn't sure how it would be received.

I'm in the middle of a story now that commemorates the Fabulous Fox's third anniversary (can you believe it's been that long?) But I'm a bit bogged down. It may be a while.

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That reminds me that we haven't see American Star in a long, long time! Any chance of a new story?

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That reminds me that we haven't see American Star in a long, long time! Any chance of a new story?

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Chapter 6 -- The dining hall was furnished with two long rows of tables, separated by a wide center aisle. The roof was supported by four pairs of wooden pillars. While Madame Mantis and Dr. Lao observed from the far end of the hall, the henchmen used ropes to suspend Fletcher by his wrists between ...

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