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Hi guys,
English is not my language, but thanks to AI I managed to write a story that I hope will interest you. I fear there will be errors and inaccuracies, but I hope the final result will be appreciated.
Feedback is appreciated, especially regarding the plot and characters. I also appreciate the ones about spelling and writing, but I don't have much chances to improve on that.
PREMISE
The story features superheroine Bianca as its protagonist. She works for the powerful Goodman charity whose affairs are often unclear. Bianca's powers are derived from wearing a costume secretly produced by the organization. The costume's technology only works on her for unknown reasons. So it happens that the organization needs Bianca as much as Bianca needs the organization. If the story is successful I have many ideas for creating an entire saga.
My first story
Sorry guys,
rereading the story I realized that I posted the draft and not the revised and corrected version.
As soon as possible I will upload the fixed story. Sorry for the mistake.
rereading the story I realized that I posted the draft and not the revised and corrected version.
As soon as possible I will upload the fixed story. Sorry for the mistake.
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